pretty good but the crippling ppl on a match with practice swords and then leaving lile it was nothing is pretty unrealistic , this is not a chinese novel that young masters do whatever they want and law doesnt exist
if you think this novel is wrong, then go and read different books and get back to reality. all of you guys still dreaming and don't know or see what is really happening in real life all over the world for so many years.i don't say it is ok, but what can we do, it is here for more then 2000 years or even more. and it will continue to happen for thousand of years.if i or others can do something about it, i will support them with all my heart. but after what happened to me personally i see the dark and ugly humanity. and if you want to survive in this world, the real world then you need to accept what happened all around us and not complaint.if you complaint, you think things will be different? i wish it was, but it still the same for thousands of years,so if an Author write a story and novel that have many things that we have in real life then why not read them. i will read this novel as much as they give us chapters to read, if it will be pick up. i think it look like a really promising novel :)
Colorless | White (Common) | Green (Uncommon) | Blue (Rare) | Orange (Super Rare) | Red (Ancient) | Purple (Mythical) | Rainbow (Legendary) | Transparent (Godly) ?? Colorless is the same color as transparent no ?
hmm... I wanted to try something new and it was clear that i couldn't make it.Still, it was a good learning lesson, and i will try more.Overall, i would rate my own novel as an 'OKAY' as i didn't do much of a good job, there were good chapters but also bad chapters.Still, for newcomers or new readers or those who are reading, thanks for reading it and i hope to see you in my other novelsI am new, so please show some mercy on this catNote- Also, i have been reading everyone's comment, but it seems like due to some bugs, i can't reply to you all or even put a thumbs up, so sorry if you feel offended because i didn't reply.Thank you for reading my novel
Fairly mediocre read. Nothing that's offensively bad, though also nothing special, creative or particularly good. The writing quality is "so-so". For starters, there is plenty of simple spelling mistakes. I personally don't really mind, though still somewhat annoying.What's more annoying, is the occasional grammatical error. Also nothing too bad or too frequent. It's still there though.The thing that annoys me most about the writing quality, is the really simply and at times clumsily written sentences. A lot of simple word usage and simple sentences and the prose at times doesn't really flow too well.Update stability is fine.Story is fairly generic though interesting enough to keep most people reading.Characters in this novel are one of it's other downfalls. They are all fairly two-dimensional. There just isn't much too them. What you see is what you get.There is also plenty of weird logic leaps all over the place, which make the characters feels more like NPCs, than like actual characters.Big 'meh' for me. If this was done well, this novel would have been so much better.The world is okay. Some thing are pretty interesting, while others are straight ripped out of any generic anime.The world is also pretty childishly put together. The reasoning and motivations for the way things are the way they are, only make sense if you don't really think about them.Could overall be a decent read if you haven't read many novels like this and aren't bothered too much by the occasional writing issues and the childish portrayal of the world and characters. If you're looking for real quality and/or creative, look elsewhere.
A great novel that was given up on too early. It seemed like the author listened to readers comments a bit too much and went back and rewrote chapters which changed future paths he had already visualized. While it's good to learn from mistakes and try to make fans happy, don't ever let them change your novel midway through. This will change the way the author writes the rest of the novel even if it's subconsciously, which in this case seemed to wilt his enthusiasm for this one, which ended up causing it to get dropped suddenly. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy White Online, but my personal opinion and a few of my buddies who've read both agree that Martial Arts Master was overall a better read and had even greater potential if it wasn't dropped. I hope that someday in the future the author either continues on, or rewrites the novel and does what he imagines without other's changing his views. Either way, I'm enjoying the reread I'm doing.
this novel had an alright premise but it is completely ruined by the incompetency of the author by making the story seem like it was written by a 5 year old
Yun Xiao / Azrail D Xavon????????????????????????????.........?????????????????????????????????????????
this story is really a wow...
For some reason I can’t get into this book anymore after chapter 22. Have deleted the app, then re loaded it and still having the same issue. And after I bought coins to read it too. Anyone else having the same issue
Do you realize it would cost 200.00 to purchase all chapters and finish this book? This app to read is a rip off. You can go to kindle and buy an entire book from $10-20 dollars.
Is it good? Im gonna spend some time reading it