I've read both this and My vampire system, there's obviously been... inspiration from the latter but to be honest this just has a better story. I MUCH prefer the characters in this novel, even the MC is better in my opinion and all the other characters just mix so well. When reading Vampire System it feels so unnatural at parts and the characters(including mc) seem so half baked to me, while this novel really improves upon that aspect. The ONLY criticism I can call out is the grammar and such, it's obvious English isn't the authors's first language but still fairly better than most out there and there's a clear improvement the further along the story goes. IDK if the author has dropped this or not but I VERY much hope he continues on this some day, I definitely recommend to read this.
where is the book???????? all I see is four lines??
I have read many sports novel which involves use of system but i found this novel far better than others. I also like the idea of choosing other professions in this novel.
Entire Novel in short..
1. MC becomes mighty.. earn billions.. still wears dirty mud laced clothes and ride a tri wheeled bike... Others look down on him.. mc gets angry.. calls big bosses with high class cars --> face slap
2. Has a older gf.. sleeps with her.. goes around flirting with other girls like a *****.. guys gets jealous.. calls him peasant and poor sod.. mc shows his wealth --> faceslap.. guys call gangsters who mc had already beaten.. the rest is clear --> faceslap..
3. Masters of the world faces supernatural enemies.. gets in trouble.. calls mc.. mc shows his power.. problem solved..
4. Police are useless.. can't slove a single case because arrogant young masters are there.. calls mc.. he uses his connection.. case solved.. police 0 mc 1. Hail the mc..
5. Doctors are incompetent trashes.. can't treat a disease.. mc appears.. disease goes..
6. Arrogant.. competent and beautiful females.. becomes pussy infront of young masters.. mc appears... Another ***** added..
After all of this. Our mc is *pure*, *innocent*, *humble* #######PEASANT.
Sometimes I wonder... Is world gonna come to an end when these kind of shits get chosen while other good ones get rejected.. or dropped
Great Read..
Would have given it 5 Stars but;
- Population 100's of Billion++
- Beast Tamers are Rare? 1 High School = 80+ Beast Tamers (High School Only!?)
- Starts in Small City -> Small Prefecture (350+ Prefectures) -> Small Province (9 Provinces)
- Twin Seeds are Rare? Country of Xia has 20+ and then you have other Countries.. and this has been on for 300 Years..
- 100,000,000,000++ Population!! What could ever be Rare?!?!
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I am writting a Eastern fantasy with the R-18 genre, so there will be lot of romance and *** content.
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So far it has been a good read, it's hard lately to find a good novel with both system and cultivation in it. and I guess the fact it's connected to modern world will also be a bonus. will this novel only focus on the cultivation side or will it also touch the modern world?
author is using unreasonable assasination technique ... it's illogical
Author didn't learn about medical knowledge ; human anatomy, forensic etc....
let me tell you...
in the first 10 chapters, MC shifted to a fly. He stabbed the victim with a needle at the artery.
that needle has 0,2 mm in width and 1 cm / 10 mm in depth...
meanwhile the common carotid artery exhibited the closest average distance to the skin (23.5 +/- 6.9 mm) whereas the internal carotid artery exhibited the closest average distance to the vertebral body (7.36 +/- 3.8 mm, measured to the transverse process)
the needle could not reach the artery
you could see the picture
This is one of those novels where you will either loved it, or you will really hate it. The MC has a system that requires him to have a useless sect but his disciples goes OP instead. This gains his sect fame, which cause the MC to lose his cultivation. In many ways, the MC is like Boss Pei in "Losing Money To Be A Tycoon", Anyone who loved that novel will love this one.
This story is very intriguing. The opening grabs your attention right away, and the nain character is a bit of an inigma.
The author just needs to brush up on her English a bit more and rely on google translate a bit less.
If they fix that, and update more regularly I am certain that this will be a five star story, hands down.
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