Worst detective story ever. There is like zero logic applied to the mc's claims of what happened in a case. He has no evidence what so ever to support his claims/story of what happened before he acts on the things he knows from his system.
similar to im actually a cultivation bigshot! but different enough chapters 1 to 116 are really good 117 jumps around a bit and changes where people were said to be almost like they were confused and couldn't remember the past few chapters details after that little arc end and we get back to the main character suddenly his attitude actions and whole vibe do a 180 its like another author took over but he just wasn't as good or he decided to just change the whole setup without any reason or explanation two people who could be considered part of his household and somewhat close to are now strangers who he is thinking rude, and contradictory to previous attitude, thoughts towards with no sense of the closeness they previously showed towards each other then there is a bit of deja view when they acknowledge that this is their second deal then go through the same script more or less word for word as if they were meeting for the first time.
In conclusion really good and recommend until about chapter 116 then it just goes downhill and ruins all previous good impression.
That Luo Weiwei is unnecessary
BE WARNED AUTHOR is deleting everything below 4 or 3.5 stars.
This story is so bad dont waste your time and money. It was supposed to be a vrmmo game story but now unnecessary mystery and romance drama.
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DROP IT THIS INSTANT!!!
Absolute trash, whatever little value this unique concept had lost in converting into western version. Greatly disappointed.
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Very good take on system theme , beyond the basics the history brings fresh ideias e creative character , just a more stable chapter launch rate
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Author, first of all, hello. I have finished all parts of your work as of now. I read it a little too fast as it was a book that I couldn't take my eyes off of. I'm not going to rave about your work. A person who reads your work is ashamed to criticize destructive criticism. If web novel does not pay you for this work, I recommend that you contact different sites related to this field. Even if you don't write this masterpiece for money...
I was shocked that a piece of this quality received so little attention. Only 13 reviews? I laughed. Whether it's the author's writing, the flow of the story, the realism of the characters, this book is of great value to me.
No, the story is so natural and good that it's like you're really describing what you saw.
Are there any shortcomings?
I didn't notice it while reading. This is proof that the author threw a thousand tons of soil on the plot holes.
I have two questions.
Why doesn't the northern region use swords? I haven't seen anyone who can wield an ax either. So these people don't use cold weapons?
Where did you learn to make such good cakes?
I appreciate. I'm following.
My native language is not English, so there may be errors in some parts of the comment. Anyways. Seriously, this story only needs an introduction and it's ready to take flight.
First 7 chapters and I'm in love with this novel. .. .. .. .. keep it up! can't wait for it to release the chapters fast. .. .. .. .. .. ..
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