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The writing us phenomenal but still need work on grammar and punctuation. Overall, the plot is well written and guides the readers to its intended outcome. I've read some novels with the similar premise, but they were poorly written.
How do you feel writing a story that captivates my eye?
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Most people from WN and RR already know the settings for this novel. Beloved by everyone, missed by many...If only the Author didn't have his period back then ? .. Anyway, this novel unfortunately lacks a bit compared to the original, doesn't flow as good and is a bit too cliché, but the story is still really interesting and I can't say if the more advanced chapters become better. No masterpiece, but still good to read and worth it if you want to binge away your day.
Honestly this book sounds great, the idea Behind it is alSo great, But i have to dRop it after a few pages bc the wrIting wuality is....well the easieSt way to descrive it is like this: it seems as though this is the rough draft of the book, paragraphs have missing spaces (not too big of a deal), grammAr is Decent, however i have to ask, does the auThor have an issue with the word “the?” Bc every single sentence or paragraph is misSing the word “the” where it is Beeded. ex: AuThor of the book Made a great book vs the author of the book made a great book. there are nore like this and its everywhere not in some random Places of the book. it makes it really hard to read the book properly and i had to coBstabtly Go back and reread the sEnstences wHile adding the word “the” Into them. im not going to Get rid of the book as i hope the author goes back and Fixed rhese issues, however i wont read it until its fixed.
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Read a little bit. The first 2-3 chapters were interesting. Then everything went downhill from there.MC is supposed to be smart but tends to piss everyone off for no fucking reason just of a massive ego and child like attitude.And then the author piled up cliched situations upon cliched situations till I felt that even reading this was a chore.Won't recommend this web novel to anyone.It's really bad. I don't understand how people can stand to read this.