Hi ,This is Shirley, I am an editor an editor of a digital writing platform- D R EA M E.After reading your book, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected], then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story.SincerelyShirley
I haven't even read the novel. Just the synopsis. But for that I'll give you a five star. I'm still reading Lord of the Mysteries. After finishing I'll give your novel a go. Bro, one thing. Put reader's first, fine. But don't get tired from all the posterior ends in the platform who complain about every single thing. Pace the novel well so that you don't get tired from writing. Character development, plot, grammar, everything can be learnt from experience. This is just your first novel. Take into consideration your mentality too. Don't get too tired so that you leave it without end. Take a hiatus. So many authors who had good ideas or potential for a story, stopped after some time cuz people where blabbering about character development and stuff. They tried to please the readers whithout thinking of themselves and got tired so they stopped the novel.
I want to see Vikings conquering the world. Obviously using science from modern world. Not ignorance and stakes. Awe science! Death to cannibal pedophiles.
This is an incredible story that takes common tropes in these types of stories and gives them a very unique twist, the humor is good too; Unless you're one of those offended of s**t who wander around wanting to correct everything according to their way of seeing the world. Those who are not able to take a slightly risque joke and are dedicated to criticizing the story based on this, instead of the plot that although it seems a bit repetitive has very unique and interesting twists.Perhaps the strongest point in the story is the system, which forces the MC to work hard for any gain, with the fabulous way of taking tropes in a new light as second place.
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Quick interview......Do you plan to write this till the end?Most work similar to this dropped and update stability is slow. Showbiz genre is a like a curse for me,it's really depressing
I have spent a lot of time for this bookYou know I didn't prepare for my examsNow I am working on 4th chapterPlease comment and vote for my chapters.
⛔REVIEW: Currently at 500+ chapter⛔*This is why many says this novel is NTR: The MC has 4 friends in the academy named Kyle, Lisa & Helia. Kyle likes Helia but Helia likes the MC. After some events Helia & MC became a couple and married while Kyle was heartbroken but tried to be happy by doing playboy sh*ts. After some chapter, the MC goes leads wars and stuff while never having for time for his wife, Helia. Kyle sees how pitiful Helia but does nothing due to being bff with MC.While leading war MC is poisoned and only has months to live. MC thought he would die so he distanced himself from his wifey, Helia. Plot armor happened and MC learned how and where to find the cure of the poison. While finding cure, MC was seduced by another woman and they had s*x.On the other hand, Helia is managing the MC's land and having a hard time and her father died. Kyle sees how pitiful Helia is and seduced her. Helia gives in and they kissed and flirted.MC comes home cured and learns about the affair from his spy. MC just waited Helia to choose between him and Kyle because MC is feeling guilty that he f*cked another girl.Helia ended things with Kyle and chose MC because she learned she is pregnant with MC's child.*If you like Tales of Reincarnated Lord, you will love this novel.⛔Highly recommended
Hi author. Your story plot is amazing and intriguing. The readers who like to read system novels, this is totally for them . I could not find any grammar mistakes. As for the world background it is also nice. As its just the start all the best and keep writing