Oh! Yup I've seen some other donghuas not following the main plot of a novel.
What's TCF?
The system upgraded his body and metabolism he shouldn't be so weak to alcohol.
update please?
This novel should have potential but sadly
Why doesn’t anybody translate finish it? Web and here only translate until 424/428 only. The full series is 595.
I'm actually surprised how there is never any spell or item for space lockdown or space anchor kinda thing to make use for dimension shifting and long teleportation fights.
I have read up to chapter 560 and I can say the following:1) Don't start if you don't like blood and gore.2) The author works really hard to write the book, have you ever seen a writer studying biology for scenes of blood and gore?3) The character is intelligent and capable, just a bit stupid in discovering the system's capabilities.4) The only thing missing is little or no side character descriptions.Note: Sometimes we forget what the characters look like, so sometimes they could be reminded in the form of little reminders or a special section explaining character appearances could be published.5) In short, it is a book that has been given a good effort, you will not regret reading it.
Hi! I have read until Chapter 3. Even though it is still early for me to write a review, I just came across that this is the second time Noah trying his luck with this series. So this early review is for supporting him.
He changed the title, the cover and even the synopsis. What I noticed, the synopsis did not do the justice for this series. No wonder most authors said synopsis is the most important part in "selling" a book.
For the first three chapters, I can guarantee you that this series is different than what you have read. It is the same feeling and instinct whenever you see a new manga that you feel, "This one is going to be a big hit."
In terms of writing, it is good for a webnovel. You cant expect the newbie authors here to have a very high quality of writing since it would be costly to hire an editor.
In terms of updates, I believe the author already had many chapters written but yet to be upload since had mass released this series before. So you can expect a stability in the updates.
For the story development, the concept of elemental power is not something new. Same goes for the aura power. We have seen this quite a lot of time.
But, the way how the power is wielded and written is good and can make you excited. The same goes to how the fighting scenes were written.
For characters, I only came across a few of them since it is still early. But I like the way Noah wrote about them and introduce them. Only for the head of the families part that felt unnecessary to be introduced if they were just for the sake of a few unnecessary lines.
I reserve my comment on the world building since it is still early for me to comment about it. Similar to others, I will come back later for another review.
Is thare Romance..? in this story.? anything.? Seggs.? love.? other things.?
I am in love so far and I hope to see more in the future.....................................................................................
The story idea is very fresh. So far I have not discovered the ability of whispering. This is very interesting when the ability possessed through a whisper. Cheers to the author!?