Mc just sucks, he’s supposed to be smart but keeps on making major mistakes. I feel like the plot is forced and what’s up with cultivators and knowing he has an inn. Does he really not take the systems warning seriously.. I hope he don’t let the people he knows stay in the inn for free because that’s just being an idiot, what if they get killed by strong people.
Captivating on the first chapter, to be honest I got more attracted to the book when I noticed it's author is also named geni ?
I see "kingdom building" TAG and I will support the book
Good story very nice to read and happily enjoy it with the different pacing of events
after chapter 40 the Grammer and editing goes down by alot, the character name keep getting switched around and alot of other editing problems.
The world building is very excellent. I know this is a translated novel so I'm not cursing out the translator when I say. The author keeps on forgetting a few stuff like levels, status effects, etc.The amount of sexualizing and inability to write good female characters in this book really throws me off. If they aren't soft and cute, their breasts are bursting out of their clothes and if their breasts aren't bursting out of their clothes, they're gold diggers, if they aren't gold diggers, they're stupid, or they're all of them in one. I wouldn't have complained if they had character but they don't even have that.Also everyone just seems so stupid compared to MC(not too surprised cause well it's an Asian novel). They're all gamers so why is it that no one knows the basics?Another thing is MC takes sooo long to level up but everyone else just jumps to where he is in a short amount of time. He does like 15k damage on average so why are people who only do like 1k average damage catching up to him so fast?Also, why do you make a game that can make characters op if you want to kill them. Is it fun to see a struggle before they die or....Why is it only MC that goes back in time, why not someone stronger who has more IQ or EQ? There are moments when MC just straight up blows his cover and everyone is like "ok"I’m just a quarter way through this novel so I’ll read more and hopefully change my review for the better.
Overall i really enjoy it thus far but the only thing I am worried about is the romance and harem genre. Everyone knows that K-pop idols mostly or don’t get involved in romance less a harem so please keep that in mind and dont make the mc get a girlfriend.
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Overall O like this book it’s a fun read decent progression speed good world background ???
It's a pretty good story so far. minor and confusing grammar errors. For example in the second chapter (minor spoiler) the child wraped in cloth, they keep switching gender he, her, and back to being a boy. This isn't a final rating as the author is still editing. So far if they gave a general description of the characters like hair color, eye color, mentioning Britain helped, hopefully this helps and the author sees this.
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