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Хорошая, и очень лёгкая новвела, можно почитать и отдохнуть. Хоть фантазии многовато, но при этом рамсказывают жизненную ситуацию. Надеюсь автор продолжит публикацию.
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The start was a bit convoluted and didn't flow as smoothly as I'm expecting. The story is pretty bland, I don't hate formulaic stories but I do hate boring ones. For a novel about VRgames to work, it ne3ds good dialogue, it's hard so I don't mind switching it with some comic relief. All we got are BS quests, MC's first day he got a B rank for his first quest, then a Village quest, then an S rank quest. I don't mind an action packed beginning, but this is just way too much.
Soul Keeper had true potential. Soul Keeper was original, and well written. An excellent addition to the genre. Soul Keeper had standard tropes delivered with a smooth writing style. This was a smooth flowing story with lots of action and very likeable characters. I would recommend Soul Keeper to any fan of the genre.The characters were so real and memorable that they could step outside the pages and be in the room with you. I cared what happened to them as if they were my own friends and family.Soul Keeper kept me spell bound, and I was compelled to keep reading. Each scene flowed smoothly from one to the next.The world-building was superb and each scene was easy to visualize based on the character's senses and mood. Action scenes were vividly presented and easy to follow.I am blown away by the author’s ability to write such engaging, real-life, entertaining, phenomenal scenes. The writing style was consistent and used precise words so that exposition didn't slow the pace. There were no typographical and grammar errors that I remember.
drawing this ending out for sure. gonna take the last month just to cover one mini plot. leo is still now an OP baby, luke finally stopped trying to bed cert. the dad still doesnt talk to kids, mom and amanda are barely mentioned. there are no beautiful women beside the random pink lotus, that only seems to be there to help jerk luke off now that he isnt getting off to cert anymore. stupid frog, who author thinks is a great funny character but is just as immature and repetitive as leo.
Why is there no Yandere Tag?
The story development is unique among all xianxia types I have read. These first chapters really piqued my curiosity,for example the main character seems reincarnated but it is only hinted,the author doesn't go at all into lengthy explanations how the mc only naturally could overcome this or that problem due to his past life or anything similar. The translation is also excellent but I have to add that personally as a Chinese language learner I would like an explanation of certain idioms or language intricacies. The characters are interesting full of common moral flaws that makes them more refreshing and easy to identify with.I have to point out that the main character seems a bit wise beyond his age,but that could be explained later on. The world has not been unveiled as of yet so I can't really judge it,the interrelation between different social statuses is as expected in a feudal way of governing. All in all I think it is an excellent read and I recommend it to all but younger audience.I especially appreciate the humor and feel it adds a lot to the enjoyment of the read but the jokes and perspective offered can be understood by more mature audience.
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Just finished it, personally I liked it even though it got some minor spelling mistake it’s not that bad. Currently I don’t know the status of the 2nd book but hopefully I get to read it soon. Anyways thanks for the good read!?
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I like how the MC starts off self-centered! It provides a great setup for the story and allows the reader to imagine how he might change and evolve. This story has a lot of potential, I can't wait to see what the author does next.