Mom's love at highest

It's a story about ghost taking over a new body (he is still a ghost possessing the body and not a reincarnate). The world had ghost, shaman/Taoist? and envoy/worker from afterlife. Story development is kinda slow but each chapter are interesting enough. Maybe after chapter 20-30+ will you see the mc purpose/something interesting. Mostly comedy and a little action. Not much of horror involve except ghost (which are not told in scary manners).

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another see hint novel, another check in novel what more?    .............................................................................

drawing this ending out for sure. gonna take the last month just to cover one mini plot. leo is still now an OP baby, luke finally stopped trying to bed cert. the dad still doesnt talk to kids, mom and amanda are barely mentioned. there are no beautiful women beside the random pink lotus, that only seems to be there to help jerk luke off now that he isnt getting off to cert anymore. stupid frog, who author thinks is a great funny character but is just as immature and repetitive as leo.

awesome book.   grabs you at the beginning and then keeps the ******* while explaining the development.                                    

The storyline is great along with the plot but the grammar and punctuation is pretty bad. The storyline and plot support each other and you are not being confusing but the grammar and punctuation make the story hard to understand as it mess’ with how easy it is to read. I would proof read a couple of times to make sure it is ok and flows nicely