i guess ill review this, however take this review with a grain of salt since we are only barely getting started with the actual game. the first 40 chapters are purely prelude to what is actually going to happenbut this is my opinion of things so far.writing quality is pretty solid. simple easy to read writing, i dont find myself doing double takes on strange wording or similar things. overall good.updates. if the author can keep up his 2 chapters every other day ill be impressed. he has also done the smart thing and mass released the first many chapters in a short time frame to draw attention, now he just need the golden stars from the review to really draw attention in this oversaturated genre.the story is a bit hit or miss, its not very unique, but it is tried and tested, so you kind of know what to expect. i suppose its mostly personal preference, but i kind of look on in contempt the way he handle slaves mostly because i think im allergic to these neutral good types. and i think its hilariously hypocritical to have such strong stance on slavery while binding the adventure guild woman to eternal master-slave relationship.whatever. onto the next point.characters are ok. the mc and the wolf girl i quite like and their relationship makes sense. i like his friend and his wife. however the relationship with the mermaid woman and the adventure guild woman, kinda rub me the wrong way.mermaid does a 180 far too quickly and she feels forced into the story a bit too quickly because he needed the secretary type, the same goes for adventure guild woman, i know he needed someone versed in the world, but i just really dont like her...? oh yeah the r18 scenes are pretty cute. even if you arent really much into r18 content, its really short and sweet and generally dont take up much of the content. anyway enough ranting.the world is probably the most compelling, i find the monolith group story really good, and it makes alot more sense than the usual "black technology" or something similar explanation. so good job here author. we also have a pretty decent chunk of knowledge on the world, and i find the native faction and inhabitants act. fairly natural. the world is easily the most compelling about this story so far. so good job here. some compare it a bit to the novel "guild wars
Not making a big review this time but I really like this book. Characters are alright, the Mc suits my taste and the others are amusing or fine in my opinion. Unique setting too as it’s apparently the dao-ending period where cultivation is going down as the world’s spirit qi is weakening. Kinda slice of life, action is fine I guess but I mainly get a comfy and relaxed feeling reading this. All in all solid book that I recommend to you all. I really didn’t like last week’s trial read but if the other new books are like this one then it seems we have a good selection this time. Cheers everyone, thank you for reading my review.
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Excellent. Fiction overused or used to it's maximum. Reading it one can get crazy on the matter of what you both did while alone. But that's how it's written. Good beginning Mr. ✅
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Extremely - EXTREMELY - difficult to read! It took immense effort just to decipher the sentences. I had hoped the story would improve over time, but it unfortunately didn't. The first chapter was hideous, the second showed improvement, but then after the third, quality dipped to all-time-low again.Let's forget about writing quality for a moment and address the elephant in the room: story development and character design. The protagonist so far has 0 (yes zero!) personality. We don't know anything about him apart from the one tiny little detail that he's a transmigrator from our Earth. You would think after this abysmal display of character design things can't possibly get any worse! But no! Somehow it does.The protagonist in a display of absolute genius decides to reform the government to not only have a constitution, but a constitution which directly limits the Emperor's (the MCs) power. Transforming the absolute monarchy into, you guessed it, a constitutional monarchy. This author is clearly either completely ignorant about historical social evolution, or worse...a liberal snowflake.