Its... alright. The book is good and the story is good. But it feels like reading those mangas that doesn't have any plot at all. Like Slice of Life mangas. The only plot that I've seen is the dungeons. Its a fun read by yourself, but I guess I don't really see the appeal of vlogging. I'll still continue to read it and check it out in the future again.
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First, the book's synopsis struck me that it would be mainly about family matters, but it is definitely more than that. Second, The main strength of the story for me is the plot and having a relatable male MC, it is cool to have such a character. Third, The book's character design and story development were awesome and well-thought, I love the pacing and progression of the story while keeping some cliff-hangers from time to time. Fourth, the writing quality was good, there were technical and grammatical errors here and there but they can be fixed. However, maybe this is just a personal opinion feel free to disregard it hehe, I would suggest that there would be descriptions of the character's emotions among the dialogues such as their facial expressions, mannerisms, etc.Overall, the story was awesome, can't wait for the next chaps!
This is so good. I really loved the plot it was really interesting and how you start to build the characters and the world. I'm waiting for the future update its really good and worth to read.
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Dang it this is really good good good read can’t wait little zombie boy to eat eat eat!!! A world unlike any other a novel unlike any other what more can one ask for....brains!!!!??????? hopefully this zombie gets some justice for all te zombies out there it’s not all about the word...brain...???
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great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
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this is a good book .ever read it, trying to figure out how to use energy stones, it kinda sucks??????????????????????????
This isn't a serious novel so adjust your expectations, it's a gag really. I'm not a fan of romance and I abhor harem, it's a stupid concept that's only good for driving plot, drama or comedy. This novel doesn't feel like a romance or a harem but instead a silly comedic cultivation story with a bit of a focus on silly character interactions. No real depth to it at all, no worldbuilding, plot, etc but it's doing what it set out to do to a somewhat satisfactory extent so I'll cut it some slack. 2.25/5.
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