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I’m loving the story It is one thing to own a library; it is quite another to use it wisely. I have often been astonished how little care people devote to the selection of what they read. Books, we know, are almost innumerable: our hours of reading are alas! very few. And yet many people read almost by hazard. They will take any book they chance to find in a room at a friend's house; they will buy a novel at a railway stall if it has an attractive title, indeed. I believe in some cases even the binding affects that choice. The selection is, no doubt, far from easy. I have often wished someone would recommend a list of hundred good books. If we had such lists drawn up by a few good guides, they would be most useful. I have indeed sometimes heard it said that in reading everyone must choose for himself, but this reminds me of the recommendation not to go into the water till you can swim.
Great Novel the only thing needed is an editor since it takes up to 3 tries to understand some sentences which really disrupts the reading flow
If you want a story about Martial arts expert reincarnating, and becoming young master of prominent family, through raw martial powers and cunning plots raising his influence in secret and confronting Martial World, go ahead and read 'Rebirth of The Heavenly Demon' by Jang Young Hun.
Just read on w.u.x.i.a.w.o.r.l.d.com. In webnovel, there are a lot of translation errors and upload errors (missing chapters + chapters out of order) that are never fixed/addressed. On top of that, they went and made 400+ old chapters premium. Money-sucking and greedy b@stards run this website.
Very good harem story! But you forgot Rias! The demon empress! Where is she author! And you didn’t even mention the names of the archangel wives that he has, You didn’t mention End being in the final session that they have and her children. Besides, in the beginning of the story, you mentioned that he has more than 40 wives, not including the new ones, so who are they and where are they author? And as the greatest being in his universe, Kai should be able to revive the dead ones including Lana and Kana, which just died years after he came back. It should be possible for him to fish them up in the river of time(I added this assuming there should be one). It is really a very good story and very exciting to see Kai rise up from the mortal realm to the highest realm he could reach but you could have made a better epilogue mentioning all of his wives and not forgetting a single one of them. Pleaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeee!!! Make epilogue 2.0 for the forgotten wivesssss.
Translation Quality 5 Stability of Updates 5Story Development 1 Character Design 1World Background 1
Everything is greate but i think release is becoming slow.because of the anime , please release more page please ?? all in all everything is greate!!!
Ugh, I got dizzy by just reading the synopsis. My braincell can't keep up with it. Got to get out of here asap............Ugh, I got dizzy by just reading the synopsis. My braincell can't keep up with it. Got to get out of here asap............
The story is good i hope it gets translated atleast somebody give me raws
This was a cute, short read.The incident with Trevor's ex trying to be on the guy in the bathroom fizzled out, which I was glad for.The rating isn't higher due to quite a few grammatical errors and words used incorrectly.
I started this story with some expectation, but honestly I'm very disappointed. The translation quality and stability are fine for now, but the development of the story, character design and world background are basically rubbish. The way he earns his power is interesting and by reading you feel as if there really is some sense, rather than just being random; but after that the story stops being good. There are many flaws in the character's day-to-day logic. He is in a marine biology university, and although he has claimed to not be a good student before, he has the mind of someone at age 8. He is always having random lascivious thoughts with women he knows, and he does not expect them to get angry. He has the habit of speaking aloud his ridiculous thoughts without even checking if anyone is listening. He was frightened in an extremely ridiculous way when he shouted nonsense on the beach and a woman heard and was angry, further stating that it is normal to imagine that she was a ghost (consideration: this woman was 'coincidentally' a police beauty, extremely nosy in the life of others). The view of foreigners from the author's point of view is also at least questionable. It looks like it will become a Chinese ultra-nationalist novel too. Anyway, strongly recommend not to read.
This is the first time reading a magical Realism genre...The synopsis looks quite interesting and I read the first chapters which I liked so far...I will read further chapters when I get free time...The author's writing style is well written...Definitely recommended book...Excellent work, Author! Kudos!
