How To End a Crush

It's a great one Author, keep it up.

The protagonist is lame as f .he becomes a monster trainer to revive his dead parents a lod of BS ,he is described as a cold person who don't put his nose in other people's business and next moment he trolls some random minor because he fcuking can .his naming sense is dumb and becomes unbearable in future .and what is this green hat joke I know what  it means but come in they just stretch it too far do no one wears green hats in China dumb novel trash novel cardboard characters useless faceslapping .

"When you enter university in the future, they will organize things for beastmasters to train in the beast world."This is such a copout thing for the Author to add.The MC is already fighting in the Beast World and no one cares.There are no classes devoted to surviving in the Beast World for these kids so they have no survival experience! So how is letting an ignorant kid stomp about in there alone a good idea?And if even the combustion effect of gunpowder doesn't work, how were they brewing the tea in the shop the MC visited?The World building in this Novel is ripped off from so many other better novels that did it correctly that it's become just a mishmash of tropes. The Author just took ideas from them without understanding *Why* the ideas worked, or attempted to make them fit together properly.

To be honest I wasn't supposed to read this because of the lack of chapters and the title, here I thought it would be like those Xianxia sh*ts but then I accidentally tapped this novel by accident since I'm using a mobile, thus since I was bored and nothing to read then I continued reading this...at first this novel Entrance was serious.almost the same as Overlord (Anime) but there are just similarities but when I continued to read till Chapter 3 I got hooked this kind of novel is a gem!glad I accidentally tapped this novel or else it would be left unread in my Library since I've already booked marked it even without reading it.

Great Novel the only thing needed is an editor since it takes up to 3 tries to understand some sentences which really disrupts the reading flow

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