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The book is interesting, the author did an amazing job with the characters and the story line and also I like as the story has a fresh story line that we are not used to reading. Keep it up author
Nice story to read while waiting for chapters.World background not mentioned at all.Your standard trope characters.In the first ~8 chapters it feels like the translator skipped some text.
Alright I haven't read all the chapters out rn but I have to say I really like it so far. The characters are interesting to read about, and aren't flat 2d characters with no personality. The story isn't boring or longwinded, and can still keep my attention for chapters at a time. I haven't seen an obvious grammar or spelling mistake so far. The creme de la creme of this story for me is the monster mc I just love that sort of thing! Keep up the great work author!!! q(≧▽≦q)
This Is MyReview A a a a a a a a a a a a a aa a. A a a a aa a a a a a a a a a aThanks for the great story thus far sir. Hoping for more and faster updates.The progression is great by the way.
This is a story that follows MC Nicholas Phire, an arsonist dubbed 'Phoenix Phire by the media. I like the start in the Gladis Hub. The game Colonial has potential, I like the choices involved in making a real custom character.
This is the author. This novel is meant to be a fun, parody novel filled with fantastical situations. Although some may not be realistic, read it with joy and pleasure. I aim to inject my own sexy ideas as much as I can think of. Please enjoy it!
I keep coming back to one question: what is the actual stakes here? On the surface, it's a live streaming competition. Yun Yun wins rock-paper-scissors, she wins player kills, she gets gifts. But the real tension isn't about winning or losing — it's about what happens when someone starts paying attention. Every gift y sends raises the stakes slightly. Twenty cruise ships is impressive. Thirty-one is obsessive. A hundred crowns because she mentioned them in a bullet comment? That's not support, that's surveillance wrapped in generosity. And Yun Yun knows it, or at least she feels it — the way she leans forward to read his messages, the way she freezes when he sends forty hearts after a simple gesture, the way she stays up until 2 AM talking to him instead of sleeping. The conflict isn't external. There's no villain, no rival threatening her career, no dramatic betrayal. The conflict is internal and it's quiet: Yun Yun is getting used to being prioritized, and that's dangerous. She's an early sleeper who stays up until 2 AM. She's a streamer who's supposed to be professional but finds herself genuinely smiling when a name appears on screen. The stakes are her own boundaries, and the story hasn't even started threatening them yet because it's too busy showing us how soft the landing is. But it will. It always does. The question is whether she'll notice before it's too late.
if you mind: "oh that's interesting"! yeah, but even your start reading first 10 chapters. Just author type more about how feel and how not so cool MC and he good that, but in moment i hate woh much him like idiot, MC is very difficult. sorry author but i critical hate how your positing MC. just writing easy not so hard demotivated your character his not so fkng stupid MC him not need to up for story, he easy because u write how powerful him. uhh...im so angry why I'm reading so much ((
A great story and a promising author ...... Neat reales rate .... 2 - 3 chapters a day is a very satisfying rate I have to say ..... Keep up the good work author ... We're supporting you ❤️
I very rarely drop novels, however as I have aged and after about 7 years reading light novels and web novels I no longer have the energy nor the patience to slog through poorly written stories with very little logical consistency of the story WITHIN its OWN rules. When the story breaks rules of our world its fine, but when characters are poorly written, or just not written at all with zero motivation or reasoning skills then it makes no sense. Also as a biomed major i can safely tell you that fucking penicillin is not the be all end all this guy makes it out to be and using it in the inexperienced and retarded way he does will lead to most bacteria becoming immune to it within less than 10 years and causing the bacteria to be even harder to deal with as a result which leads to my main gripe. THE MAIN CHARACTER KNOWS NOTHING ABOUT SCIENCE, THE SCIENTIFIC METHOD, or the author has no background in the sciences or medicine in general. The poorly written way the author speaks about plant life, medicine creation and the making of penicillin, which is completely retarded the way he uses it BTW, infuriates me on a base level. Also the coincidences and logical assumptions and leaps that the main character does and comes across make NO GOD DAMN SENSE.
The novel is great but I hope the author hasn’t dropped it