I only have one thing to say... LET HIM COOK
Disclaimer: I've only read the first 31st (free) chapters. I don't mind it being cliche, but everything is bland.The writing is one of, if not, the main issue. I would suggest the author add more structure going forward because right now, it is a mess: the sentence structures and tenses are all over the place, author notes are added in the middle of the chapters (more on that later) and the narration is basic, at best.The pacing does not let you immerse yourself in the novel because the reader is simply flown from one point of interest to another with barely some background info on what is happening as a whole, and the rest is time skipped. Finally, the most infuriating thing about this novel are the author's notes in the middle of the chapters. Not even speaking about the 4th wall, the notes explaining what the few lines before implied are the worst, removing fluidity of an already tedious read.
tyranny of steel vibess. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
really good novel, structure , grammar, and development is on point. chapters are frequent and the characters are likable and feel real. really liking it so far :)
Great book, overall liking it, still in early chapters but think it could use a little worldbuilding outside of the main characters area
The story is very good. Well the most I like about is the elements of tag "Depiction of cruelty". A man driven to the extreme by the gods just because he refuses to give the gods access to something he and his friend built. Now that he has gotten half control over the tower that they built he will do everything in his power to get revenge against the gods and devils.
I am a high school student, and I also work in the weekends. So, you can expect me to not post at times.This novel may have grammatical mistakes as I am not a professional. But I hope you stick around because I have a good feeling about this one. I don't focus too much on the system because it's more about Ares doing great things on his own. Hope you like it, this is a novel I have high expectations for.
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Just have a 5* good novel keep it up.
Everything was good until the character Día came into play. Story started deviating towards something unknown and narrow. I only wish the story will be good in future. But the story seems to be out of my play. World background is not clear and sudden appearance of characters make it hard for me to follow. The characters don't have any substance but they are there in the story.