Just few chapters and already addicted. The universe is so deep that you can’t help but drown into.I like the characters building and the easy way the writing style brings us this magic/necromancy/alchemist references
Skip to the chapter 15... the juicy part starts from there if you're not into the slow pacing.Author is super wholesome. Makes everything more welcoming compare to the like of "My Vampire/Warewolf System".
There are only three chapters so far and it is really great so far. The first chapter really brought me the trust issue when that old man did something like 'that.' And for Shade, he is a pretty much realistic character except he decided to buy the 30$ chocolate. Haha, to sum it up the plot is great, the character is well-made and it gives me thrill since the story is really enjoyable. Read this if you enjoy the survival and thrilling stuff.P.S. Great job, author!!! Keep writing, I wish you well in your contest, I would vote for you if I have some spare powerstone.
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There are too many grammatical mistakes you should edit them properly Initiation is already problematic making main characters she when it should be he for other things we will see how author reacts to comments and the remedies he makes
This book is an amazing piece of art just like the authors other works. This book makes me wish that the author had the shadow clone jutsu because I can't seem to get enough of it and would like to wake up one day with a 100 updates. That is the dream. I would highly recommend it as well as the authors other works.
I love this story but I'm interested if the female cops are going to come back into it Yumi and Sarah can't forget about Claudette and I need to know more about this vampire Jelia need to know more next chapter PLEASE
I adore this the only thing I find off putting is it's pacing BUT the pacing it has is more than made up for in quality if I had money I can say with confidence that I'd pay $1000 for 100 chapters just from the sheer enjoyment I gain even from "filler" chapters. I hope the author continues this art (^_^). I'm currently waiting till I have 10 or so chapters saved up because I personally enjoy binging this of course it's akin to a 10 min bing at MOST if it's the relatively more wordy chapter but the euphoria I gain makes my day.
dude I will give you power stones if you would just update it daily....plzzzzz I love Hollywood novels very much...plzz don't drop it and update it.....if you want I can give you ideas as well.........
OK review time. The story was unintresting, not enough use of the system, took to long to get to the system benifets, too much slice of life. Good translation, story seems to be set in modern china with hints of a wider future universe (barley), character is generic orphan college boy with no gusto, overall not recommended for translation and not worth your time reading.