SunnyKikigSb
Overall nice story. Till chapter 10, the writing quality is nice and gets a bit better as the story moves on. Although the plot is unique. Although the development is not unique and the back story is a bit common, the plot progression is different from most of the novels.The world background and character development are nice.Kinda like the way that the MC ignores people completely when he is irritated by them. You don't get to see such distinct traits in characters too often.Nice work, keep it up Author San.
The author knows that he is writing a fanfic but from the couple of chapters I read he did a good job adding his vision on the warcraft world.I hope people understand what fanfics are and they do not get stuck on stuff like ... he missed some lore or changed stuff to much ....
I would not recommend this novel.The world building is decent and is a standard xianxia world. The MCs backstory is actually good and him being older in his previous life is a plus for me. The main problem I have is the sloppy plot progression as the MC is led around by his nose by all the charecters around him and seems to be thrown around left and right the minute he gets sent into the world.The other main problem I have is how shallow and poor the charecter development is of the MC as he is supposed to be a 60 year old man previously and have experience with xianxia novel and still falls face first into every cliche he possibly could.As of chapter 13, I cant see this story making enough changes for me to change my recommendation of not recommending this novel to other readers.
All 4 Novels this week are bad, but this one is the worse.As always you have an immature MC who is despised every chapter. If the world were really to work like that, there wouldn't be any blacksmith/shopkeeper/youngsters in this novel's world.And why do we have 4 books of 40 chapters while before we had 5 of 60?
Muito bom, ansioso pelo futuro dessa novel, ate agora tem sido muito boa .
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This story is an amazing novel.....I personally like it.This novel has a unique plot and it is really interesting......Thanks, author for sharing your novel????
I am absolutely attached to this story. Such a great storyline going and I feel the intensity and horror in the story. Fan from the beginning here! Looking forward to more chapters to come! Keep up the good work!
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