The Lord Of War

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Bland. started off well. interesting concept. but story couldnt be carried well. author's main focus is on how many women can the MC collect. the mc literally doesnt see any female characters as friends but how good their bodies are and how to kiss them. has very good businesses under him granted by system. but doesnt care. registered as student. no classes. was an orphan. mentions missing the orphanage once but doesnt even care to go back to look at it or help them. all he does is go after one female after the another. and every female is attracted to him because he has money and is handsome.. dont mention anything about his character. plot repeats again and again.

I would not recommend this novel.The world building is decent and is a standard xianxia world. The MCs backstory is actually good and him being older in his previous life is a plus for me. The main problem I have is the sloppy plot progression as the MC is led around by his nose by all the charecters around him and seems to be thrown around left and right the minute he gets sent into the world.The other main problem I have is how shallow and poor the charecter development is of the MC as he is supposed to be a 60 year old man previously and have experience with xianxia novel and still falls face first into every cliche he possibly could.As of chapter 13, I cant see this story making enough changes for me to change my recommendation of not recommending this novel to other readers.

My brain has turned into mush by reading the first 2 chapters, I think I've developed autism from the mass geocide that's destroyed my brain cells

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