SunnyKikigSb
Hello Mr inwuser**** i seen u comment on many novel
I am new to novel,u enjoyed BIRTH OF DEMONIC SWORD, AND THE NOVELS EXTRA,
plz reccomend some novel pllzzzz,i am starting and dropping novels its getting frustrating
"Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor", I think it's highly underrated and should be mentioned as one of the best cultivation novels.
Bro I had the same thing for a few novels and that after the great purge I can't remember either the name of it or the chapter I was on
Who the f giving this an 8.9/10
Short and sweet. Love the story
love love love this novel. super hilarious and filled with funny antics of our little chubby super adorable baby n all characters r too cute in their own way
a fav of mine for sure
Wow, acabo de encontrar esta novela xd, sera harem? Quiero que sea harem :vvvvvvvv [img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
There are some programs you can use for checking and correcting grammatical errors such as Grammarly and ChatGPT.
Alright First Of All I am Really Happy To Be Contribute My Writing In The Same Phases As This Novel."Gods's Journey In A New Time"- is a fantasy, Action Novel But I think it Might Set A good plot in future volumes as far i read it,it has a great story building just need to work a bit in plot cuz its still not clear enough & character designing is very good in my point of view I am giving it a solid 4.0 for overall presentation
Mc is pretty stupid but the story is okay, stupid as in his system literally has no data, he ask a question and system says it needs more data, mc says its useless , he sleeps with one girl and is surprised to find out she wasn't doing it because she fell for him but because she's training a technique ??u200d♂️. he's not just the brightest but still okay ig
It seems likea good story, but badly translated. Despite many missing connecting words, and improper word form choices, I was interested enough to keep reading until I ran out of chapters. I suspect that practice will improve the writing quickly, because the story telling is decent in spite of the slightly broken English.Some suspension of disbelief is required for me, since the setting feels rather game-within-a-game, but as long as I set aside the expectation that the main character lives in the same reality that I do, it seems fairly consistent so far.
The only qualms i have about this novel is that the dialogue is so apathetic. its like robots talking to each other. honestly if the author worded it more appropriately, then it would have been fine.
