The start is definitely a bit slow, but it’s still worth it! The only issue I have is the sometimes, the plot is a bit too convoluted and confusing to understand, so I’m left not knowing what is happening.Either way, an amazing read! Keep up the good work!
Please keep on updating at least 4 ch/week. I like game developer mc but there are only very few. So keep on improving your writing style and don't make it fast. Or slow. If the mc could copy original classic game from earth like plant vs zombies, bandicoot,mario,etc and then gradually go to big game then that would be great. Another novel that has similar story but there the mc stopped updating his game after releasing it and even forget about it. So it would be great if you don't do that and have the mc care about his game and him his fan constant updates on games. If you wanna write a similar web novel, then try making a novel where the mc start his webnovel company. This idea is also fresh and could be great but for now plz focus on this and give us new chapters and keep improving your writing style and storytelling.
Big example of power going straight to ones head (Ego). The main lead quickly develops into a ego maniac and of course that come from being op not even 5 chapters in.
This book is so creative, it gave me goosebumps. The author painted the world very beautifully, I can picture it clearly in my mind while reading it. There is depth to this. It is going to be one of the top ones for sure. I highly recommend it.
Name: 仙界走私大鳄/Immortal Realm's Smuggling KingpinRating: 8.8(30)Status: 450(Completed)Start Date: 2008-01-01(Quite old novel.)Author no. works: 14(Damn...)
I hope the worst fit the Author of this Novel.....I Really Really Really Really hope the worst for this trash Author.I would literally smile seeing him suffering because the torture he did to me in chapter 12 is unimaginable.
I give this book a 4.6. The book itself is good but it feels like it’s missing something that would be able to give it a big push but even I don’t know that that is so until You find it the review will stay but otherwise the books is good and I can’t wait for more.
when is the next chapter going to be. i am enjoying your writing so far but it is too early to think on weather the stpry is good or not yet
I have read more than 10 novels of similar types on mtlnovel.comand by the experience I can tell you this novel is for those who are new in the novel reading occupation. For experienced readers, you will find all those repetitive scenes like arrogant young masters, unlimited face slapping,all knowing MC, Harem member count +20, 2 chapters full of arrogant young masters taunting MC, 1 whole chapter of melon eating crowds talking about how MC doesn't know how high the sky or how deep the earth is and is sure to get his life destroyed, MC taking 2 or 3+ chapters to respond to arrogant young masters taunting, 2 more chapters in which MC solves that young master and last 1 chapter where crowd realises MC is not to be provoked then 1 epilog where that young master's father plans revenge on MC. After all this the cycle starts again and it repeats until MC goes to immortal world or fights aliens who came to earth thousands of years ago but repelled by Chinese and now that Chinese lost their former legacy, the aliens came back again.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo from the synopsis, it seems like the mc is going to become a legend
This is an extremely good story. The plot has very good pacing, there is exquisite world-building , and characters are fleshed out and not instantly op. I look forward to enjoying this for a very long time.