it's good ? you should read it though mc should show more emotions if possible its just my opinion it's ok either way ... hopefully (author) you will not make this story a harem novel with a brainless mc arrogant mc later in the story who only thinks with the lower half of his body ok thanks ..please don't lock the future chapters i can't afford to unlock them just for this once ? please ?❤️
Not an exceptional story, just average. Do give a try and see if it’s upto your taste.
This story is very interesting so far. The main character is smart, but not a genius, which is nice because she’s imperfect so there’s room for character growth. There isn’t a lot of information about the other characters yet so I’m hoping we’ll get to know them. Also I really liked how parts of her dream were written in code.
A good novel for the weekend with a cup of tea and good music to vibe with.The characters are decent and grammar are so-so but it was a good story nevertheless.Keep up the good work!
The premise is cool but the MC kills this story. In chapter one the MCs best friend says he acts like 15 year old. In a playful manner. False. Take that as a fact! The MC acts like a 13-15 year old ****. Someone who lacks the life experience of a 30. Which the MC claims to be. What makes it worse is that the MC knows about stores and games that have a fantasy setting but freaks out about everything. This is a wasted book with a very annoying MC.
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Is the arnis is Filipino reference of the martial arts?Anyway, it has a great start. There is a problem actually.I guess to make this story longer is to explain the setting that would makes us/readers join in your worldBut good job! For the new writer ??
Erosire is one of the best pervert author in webnovel. No dissatisfaction can be felt in terms of writing quality and i hope author continues the novel 'ghost of culture' it has potential.
+i will do my best to read this since it is so short, but i did read the first few paragraphs, and i do not know if the writer is writing this for a 3 year old child or a 30 year old ivy league adult. he tries to use intellectually large words that do not seem to be within his normal and domestic vocabulary.... but also realizing it is his first book again i will try and see and either repost or make a new one with more detail.
It is my first time reading a book like this, I tell you it's good. Imagene, a father doing everything he can for his daughter ❤️❤️❤️. Keep up the good work.
The story is pretty good, the pacing is a little fast and the characters can be a little bland. But overall not a bad read. I'm not a huge fan of how the author does dialogue, but I've seen far worse and it definitely isn't unbearable.
Great work, I'm eager to see how this story will develop! The kingdom building and action parts are quite balanced, and the protagonist isn't a scaredy cat. It seems like the relationship between the two universes is not forgotten, and we can await other invaders from the original universe sometime later. Keep up the good work!