Kanyi
chapter 204 onwards, another book starts. another MC, another world. the original story- gone.
can someone tell me when does he gains height?
I think that this novel definitely has potential to be great. the background to the story is interesting and the fact that gods r invoved always puts an interesting spin on a story but i honestly dislike the mc and his overly nice in every situation attitude, i mean hes LITTERALY a cuck and yet he still feels guilty over what happened to his ex gf. Im not sure about others but i really dislike goodie too shoes and i think mc needs some serious character development before the apocalypse senerio happens like how i think it will cause no way mc will survive in that environment with his current attitude. Also MORE HAREM MEMBERS!!!!
Very great and interesting story.I really enjoyed the plot of the story.Im looking forward to seeing its completion.Excelllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnttttttttttttttttttttttttt
Exhilarating work this is, yes. I don't wanna sound too dramatic but this is the story which adds thrill to my boring life as a reader. I loved this work. thanks author of this work.
I see the potential. I will continue to vote daily and gift if it goes well. Looking for more explanation on the powers and other things.
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A very nice story overall, but the MC is too conceited, he has the power but decides to play and that will and has always cost him a lot of which I never expected from a man who reincarnated….he acts too childish most times
-Pretty much perfect grammar-interesting mc / premise (a complete villain is nice) -powers are definitely fun...time stop is really cool keep going
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Overall the writing quality is decent and simplistic. Easy on the eyes and I'm not forcing myself to understand.I can tell the development is gonna be good for this one here but instead of telling what the story is gonna be about in the authors comment just let the flow happen and allow the story to take place instead of forcing what it's gonna be about. The readers are gonna want to figure it out for themselves. I'd say that's my one issue thus far so keep up the splendid writing my friend!
This translation is simply trash of the lowest tier.The gender of certain characters changes constantly and the grammar is awful while staying on a level below grade school.If this was a fan translation I would still recommend a few more years of learning English.BUT this is supposed to be professional and more importantly paid work. This is insulting and deplorable.
