The Paula Manuscripts 1.0

If you're tired of the same old cliché's from nearly 90% of all popular LN's. Then I suggest skipping this LN. The plot armor is really bad, and the MC's child hood trauma doesn't make sense. Either MC got rap'ed cause he was friends with a girl (mc was raped by his male cousins and uncles) or they rap'ed MC's sister and broke her legs afterwards (cause mc liked a girl.) oh and btw, the MC was like 3 or 4 years old when he was friends with said girl. lol.

The grammar and atrocious mistakes are holding this novel back. Its weird changing the present tense to past tense in the same sentence.The economics are also full of **** for the seventies and that shows zero research from the author. All it would take would be a simple google search to find the information.

Well that's quite good, but i believe author need to be carefull not to make the MC a cringe dark teenager. I don't mind a psycho but not an emo.

Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.

chapter 204 onwards, another book starts. another MC, another world. the original story- gone.

It's really well written and different from other girls novels with a system!  But it's slow.  A fantasy, carefree mode lol!  There aren't bad guys, just ants.  I couldn't continue in many chapter there are a life of tranquillity.