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A decent novel ruined by what I assume is translation issues. It hurts me in a different way that MTL. I’m just bloody confused. Author forgets level ups, doesn’t explain anything about the world leading to absolute confusion, I don’t even KNOW what his pets do! The so called ‘tomb dreams’ are complete filter with 0 explanation. They shouldn’t even be written, they are just word filter that make it even more confusing. I don’t know if some of the issues are translator or author, but it’s still a cluster fk none the less. Peak confusion was the chapter (spoiler alert) with the ape. Why tf and who tf thinks it’s alright to come kill someone over getting first place in school? Completely a force fed conflict that came out of nowhere. Novel just makes no sense and my head hurts.
Currently reading the first novel and I know I'd like to continue so I'm assuming this will be just as good. Translation quality seems decent. Will be back once first novel is done
Writing Quality GoodStability of Updates GoodStory Development GoodCharacter Design GoodWorld Background Good..........................
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i do like stories like this but I'm having to read and try to figure out what things say. i suggest the author take their time and proofread more
Super histoire l'auteur a appris de ces erreurs es a amélioré son MC et lui a donné de l'ambition. L'histoire a beaucoup de potentiel, je vous conseil de lire. J'espère que l'auteur ne va pas abandonné ce travail et qu'il aura plus confiance en lui et a son travail.
This is a good ass story so far the character is nice but isn't so stupid that he's nice and you can get those vibes from him that he simply enjoys life and wants friends. Please keep the story going author there are so many small stories out there that authors drop but I'd hate to see it happen to this one.
looks interesting ? released only 10 chapters ?
Raw mtl : 宠化全球Auithor : 乌提 Lv 4Yo I am currently writing a Fan-fic about a Uchiha Itachi in the Naruto, if that interests you, please check it out. I strongly believe that if you read the first chapter, you will want to read the next chapter(s) too. I know, I’m shamelessly promoting myself using other novels, but a guys gotta get some exposure one way or another, am I right? Also, if you read this far and haven’t already checked out the novel you are now obligated to do so. Thanks to anyone who decides to check it out.
Good novel+ for World Background( The author created a believable world that I hope gets even better as the story progresses, the idea of a magic system is at best mediocre, but it is getting a big plus for the consistency which is no small feat and the author can be quite proud of it.)- for Character Design( The protagonist is not that bad. I personally liked that you tried to give him some depth, but in the end he is like a bad side character, we know almost nothing about him and most of the character traits you tried to give him get forgotten after 5 chapters.The side characters are all just not good , we have no rival , an antagonist that just appears in the middle of the story and a love interest that couldnt be more unimportant.For real if I had to decide if the love interest or that random weaponsmith had to die , well you know who I would choose.)I can also see that you improve yourself with every chapter written, the second arc is way better then the first and I really think you got talent. Keep writing.