Fallen From Sky to Be a Mere Adventurer

Not horrible, but also not amazing.Sentence structure is a bit jarring to read, and the statement pacing is strange. My main issue is the lack of knowledge as to how Esports works, though. It's very clear to me that the knowledge on the operation of an esports team and the players practicing habits, plus the coach, that the writer does not have any experience in the esports scene. The display of a very rudimentary and romanticized version of esports is very prevalent in this novel, and detracts greatly from the experience.

I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body,and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works

just a shameless author giving 5 stars here

The writing quality and development could be inproved updates need inprovment on background aswell as character design not bad cherten parts of the chapter could be vastlyinproved

I see the potential. I will continue to vote daily and gift if it goes well. Looking for more explanation on the powers and other things.

'Unsatisfied? No! I'm absolutely satisfied!' Alexander was so excited that he even ignored the provocation.