Hello their readers and I hope you enjoy my story so leave a review and please rate me highly or perfectly and my first book the "Cultivator Dating Sim" was a mistake and shame I will leave remembered as they progress on with my new badass story!
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I like it the story has a good background it does have some grammar errors and it’s not that bad it shows really good story lines but it could be even stronger but a great story
~Positives~Really liking this novel, while it has some similarities in genre to some other novels I have read, it is also unique in so many ways; such as the very good world building, or the MC’s interesting ability that I haven’t even thought of before.~Negatives~Not much of a problem, but I am feeling like the MC’s personality is a bit bland; however, there is plenty of time to sort that out in the later chapters as there is only 10 chaps so far, so you can’t expect too much.~Summary~This has the potential to become one of my favourite novels when more chapters come out and depending on how the story progresses. Will be looking forward to more chapters! :)
A good start. The MC was conflicted with his own feelings. What was left to him after the title? Decent writing from the author, not jumble-up words or unnecessarily long sentences and info dump. All the best author
Liking it a lot so far, keep up the good job................................................................................................
Nerve-wracking. The descriptions contain enough information to create a complete picture. It feels so vivid to the point that not breathing seems natural.
A poorly written good story.There are too many grammar and present/past tense mistakes. Sometimes the phrase won't have any meaning and you'll have to try to guess what the author meant.As for the story he usually rushes with the story part but is really slow and descriptive with the crafting part, which some might like and other might think is tecnobabble (like me).Nevertheless, these rushed parts are still interesting and coupled with the MC upgrade ability, made for a nice story. The author should cut a little on the crafting part and improve more the plot with interesting events in the sect with other people or ****** more adventures.You should also add more challenge and stick to your power ranks. The MC wins too easily and too over his own level. Him as a rank 1 killing rank 19 is quite ridiculous and undermines your own system.Also there are some really stupid plot devices like Strong Cultivators not interfering in an attack on the city by bandits because it's an attack made by the young generation and they don't want to get involved because of pride, the old can't fight the young or something. I facepalmed when I read this and almost dropped.
I liked the concept of the story. It is cool to have VR theme what I felt is distinctive is that MC goes after easter eggs than some class or dungeon stuff. the main focus is innovative. I will still read through it to see the author improve the plot.
A very cool novel, the plot is not cliché and original. Deserved place in the list of favorites. Today it ended and the ending came out very interesting. I advise everyone to read it. It's a pity that it was not chosen.
A great entry into the LitRPG trope. What makes this story a bit different is the blending of the real world and virtual. The main character's family is evil and in order to combat them, he has to gain control of the company his grandfather left him and conquer the virtual world his mother and maternal grandparents created.The story isn't perfect, and I'm not a fan of the wastrel ******* image the main character has decided to engender as camouflage, but the mix of high tech real world and fantasy virtual is certainly interesting. It reminds me a bit of The Stork Tower series. The only real complaint I have is that this story is actually a bit better than the author's other novel and I hope this becomes as popular and enjoys as diverse and in-depth world building as that series.
Applause! An inspired author with great imagination! Simple, straight forward and creative. If I may, here is just a suggestion, more dialogues to keep the story more interesting! :)