SunnyKiki
Translation got a little overwhelming with notes for me at chapter 1@, story has been great though, very refreshing to have a slice of life for once.
Sounds promising, knowing that the author rarely disappoints !I will wait until there are at least 50 chapters to binge-read them.
Is it allowed to just chatgpt all those chapter so they can be understandable ? Because I kind of hate machine translation way worse then any ai translation so will make my life way better
Read till 612, very nice plot progression, concept and world building, not very much plot holes, bit a little too pov shift at the 400 ish chapter onwards grammar and spelling mistakes are there
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It was brilliant the language and choice of words and story line everything was amazing so keep it up waiting eagerly for the next part post soon
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Highly recommended!!!This novel is expertly written. There's nothing to complain about, and everything to praise. It's hard to put down. It's like a classic fantasy. Try it out.
The story is interisting the MC has a interisting backstory. the concept of mana and futures-tic concept is good the story is kind of slow at the moment and it might get into pace soon i think..the romantic bits are good the author did forget to add some details about the cataracts in between form what iian tell after reading. bit over all its a good read. i am waiting for the future chapters its getting interisting
Hope u can write more and try to fix your grammar even abit is alrdy good and hope u can try to increase more chapter. btw the girl blackrose i think is either dumb or stupid want to kill mc when he can kill an elite monster it a demon monster somemore like is she dumb or too cocky just because she is top 10 for top rookie lol..try to make umm npc abit smart dont make npc like dumb u know like other novel mc everytime get involved with people just because he is good at stuff they are not but in the end he kill thhem ugh this is wat i kinda hate . anyway love your novel for now :3
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