The story is engaging. The quality of the writing is also very neat although there are a few errors in the use of punctuation.
The story development is also very well written. I really enjoyed this story. Overall impressive!
Keep it up!
I am once again back reading this wonderful novel, i have let this marinate like a manhwa novel. i hate waiting for new chapters.
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Absolutely loving this novel it's quickly becoming one of my favorites. Your writing is great and even though some people might not like the "slow" pace I'm loving it.
I agree with another reviewer that there being few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC is a good thing for now considering it's the academy arc and the MC has no reason to care about other non-canon students (except possibly his future teammates).
However I am interested in seeing dialog in the future between the MC and his future teammates. It may open up new ways to expand on the MC as he is almost too perfect personality wise. I'm wondering if he'll have any flaws? Will he always get along with everyone? Does he work well in a team? Can he get others to listen or will he listen to others?
For now it makes sense because he's basically an adult and has no reason to pick fights with children about strength but will he ever lose his cool?
Whether he stays this Kakashi-esk personality with the work ethic of Guy or we see a new side I look forward to it either way. Thank you for the chapters!
i found this really fun at first. mc seemed fun even though he wasnt smart he was written charismatic. he was an underground fighter but he still had certain principles.
unfortunately author writes in the chinese writing style where rape is excused. now if this was a minor incident i would have looked over it but in this particular scene mc rapes a chick right after it.
made me so disappointed and disgusted.
Interesting premise, great suspense and some really emotional moments.Rant Valo, the MC, feels truly alive and his decisions are logical or at least understandable.Good story, would recommend.
A good opening with it's currently 24 chapters, the characters have a clear motivation and the story setup is interesting. There is some room for improvement in the writing such as grammar and sentence structures and in the more descriptive parts. Sometimes we get the explanation after it already happened which makes the story a bit choppy. Overall right now there's alot of room for improvement which at times take away from the story at certain points but also means that this already interesting story can get even better. Looking forward to reading more. Keep it up!
As much as I tried to like this story, I couldn't make it past the first 17 chapters.The translation is so badly done that there are certain characters that are obviously female but have male names and are only refered to as male. Then the MC's stats are all over the place. One chapter a stat is 20 and then five chapters late it is 10. Overall the translation is so bad that you can't read the story.
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A clever and well written, exciting story! It has a good mix between romance and politics, adventure and mysteries. This is the story that the tv show is loosely based on and which is good, but the novel is even better for sure.
I find the translation very good as well, It has a good flow and vibrant language!
I can’t wait to be able to read the whole story as I know there is a lot left!
I like the concept of how this is the most powerful character in the history of novels and manga. Hey author,I see you tried the patience test there,that is a new way to keep readers.love it.