Hi guys, I keep asking for it but I hope you all can give this novel a chance!
Also if you have any advice to improve my writing, pleasplease tell me as I want to improve too myself.
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I like your plot so far. The story is a little difficult to understand in the beginning but it's get better as the story progress. Overall, the story is quite interesting. Keep up your work!
The way in which You portrayed the mc an otaku boy is greatly unique. So far I'm loving this story sooo much. Can't say anything about the Ml tho it's only 3 chps. Eagerly waiting for the story to progress
This 140 minimum to write a reviews is annoying...
Anyway, good story! .
I'm a huge fan of these kinds of books but even if I wasn't, I would've read it because the author knows the way to catch the reader's attention. The book is written so beautifully that I can picture it in my head. The suspense and the curiosity had me biting my nails every sentence. It's definitely worth a read.
I am up to 25 so far and it's pretty good. It's says you got put more letters so yyyuuuyy777fyojdetozk8tey9ksdyotsshhhhhgdfrfyyudetyufyiur5iyuujjjhy7ihguoihhfy8o9oohyyhytityujgtyijgg
Sigh, this is definitely a chinese novel, one in which if you turn off your logic, you will enjoy.
Ungrateful mc
The system isn't really explained properly.
Sentinel System, who is kinda tsundere...
the personality of mc changes quite a lot.
Man I like the story so far but man is the grammar horrible. Sometimes I don’t even know if Mc is a female, narrator or a kid named Chris. Idk if it’ the translations or the author keeps Messing up with points of views
The plotline of the story is quite interesting and the fact that she's taking revenge from her father is even more intriguing tbh. Can't wait to find out how she manages to do it and if she succeeds or not ^.^ 100% recommended!
I love everything apart from the updates it's not stable and am invested in the story it's a bit sad bit great story ... authors please work harder
Story is already captivating after reading just the first chapter, really interesting, captivating and intriguing.Read this book and you'll thank me later.
Ok, I finished reading this in raws and the story gets really bad in the second half. It has around 350 chapters and the first 150 are pretty good and seem to be gearing up to become a 1000 chapter novel, but after 200 you start to notice problems. There's a lot of nationalism involved and it was hard to sit through even though I'm used to it at this point. Then after 250, the pacing starts getting really bad and entire plot points set up before are discarded or brushed through casually. Important characters forgotten, author rushes to end the story in one of the worst endings I've seen and I say this having read all kinds of bad endings over the years.I can see why this is pretty popular right now because the first half is decent, but the latter half was terrible.