oh my god I love this so so much pls continue this it is so good to see an op character such as those so pls upload this again b b
Amazing.I have nothing else to comment but this.the grammer the story and everything else is out of this world.I really love everything about this
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Dis is sogood...i loved it to the core if my heart.i want to show the bonding of vrishketu with all the pandavas especially arjuna..I also want to see vrishketu warrior skills
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I may have only read the trial chapter but I am enjoying the book so far and would like to read more of the book to see what happens next. Thanks for listening
In short this novel is confusing! And MC is an Idiot not a genius!In short this novel is confusing! And MC is an Idiot not a genius!In short this novel is confusing! And MC is an Idiot not a genius!In short this novel is confusing! And MC is an Idiot not a genius!In short this novel is confusing! And MC is an Idiot not a genius!In short this novel is confusing! And MC is an Idiot not a genius!
I'm giving it a 4 star not because at this current time I think it's deserved but because of the potential I feel like the story might have and how initially I was pumped to read it. What aggravates me about this story is the fact that 60 chapters in and he's still extremely weak as hell. Not only is he weak though but for someone making fun of him he wants to have them killed. I can understand wanting to get revenge but getting revenge when you're pitifully weak just screams stupid. Not only that but he acts pretty arrogant rather than confident from how he comes across. I also think his growth potential with his physical stats should be a lot more dramatic seeing as he has a healing ability. He should be able to enhance his stats a lot by exercising till exhaustion, eating a lot of food and then healing the damage to build stronger but he is not taking advantage of this much from what I've read.Just in the recent chapter he faints from training but he should be at a higher level of fitness just with his exercise from before and healing. I enjoy a fair bit of this novel in terms of setting, system and the magic idea in general but I can not support characters who don't think straight. The story seems to be picking up right now so that's good and hopefully this review becomes 5 stars when it does get better. Overall it's pretty good but has a lot greater potential in my opinion
For a character that have transmigrated so many times, the mc sure doesn't act like it. The mc acts like a child afraid and unsure of everything. With so much experience, I would expect that he'll mostly be apathetic and at least be able to lie proficiently. The character is disappointing. More than 364 transmigrations and he's still sweating while lieing and people can still play him anyhow. Truly disappointing