Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? ? love it ?
typical story development, everyone is trying to become enemy of MC,just to admit into an institution you have to kill others which seems like evil way but portrayed as righteous and etc etc... I got bored and I am dropping it
I like the new edge to the store. It’s a great start to a great story. I like the first half and am looking forward to seeing how this side of the store turns out.
This is good novel. Please pick these. Good horror novel ?????? not as scary as chen ge, but easier to read, some detective work, clever mc, cold and ruthless but not that arrogant (if you compare to other xianxia mc) full recommend to read
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Errr really ? Do you have to be so immersived to play a fvcking PUBG? Its not even VR game lol , the author makes a "Try Hard" MC to be a godlike player LMAODude if you want to watch good PUBG player just watch shroud lol This novel nothing but trash thats it
Water. Water. One water.20% plot. 80% of the descriptions. This is not a novel. This is a game guide. The most detailed, which devotes entire chapters to a superficial description of the class. And then another chapter, which describes a part of the class skills. But this is only the beginning of suffering. Describe skills, classes, battle systems ............... and do not show in the plot. Describe the skills and class, but in the plot show through 100-150 chapters this, of course, without forgetting 2-3 chapters to repeat the previous descriptions.The main minus of the novel is that the author makes a guide to the game, not a novel. And of course REPETITIONS. Repeat every 5 chapters as far as legends are cool, with a description of their coolness. And to say how MC is far from them. What for?From the pros, MC. Nice world.But the main minus is a huge amount of description. Literally describing damage calculation formulas. WHAT FOR? You do not play the game. You cannot manage this data.
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Its.... something. I cant say the novel is horrible, but in several instances the writing quality and ideas behind it leave a lot to be desired. Theres a lot of forced interactions and "humor" that seems like the author is trying to inject into the story, but to me at least it comes off a little forced. The author tries to make the system a mix between helpful and controlling, which ends up feeling weird because its hard to tell if its actually trying to assist the MC, just mess with his life, or force him to follow its agenda. Supposedly, some people came to this novel in promise of romance or sex scenes or whatever, but if thats the case i suggest you look elsewhere as the author skirts around those. Admittedly, im not up to the current chapters so some of these problems may have been fixed later on, but up to chapter 50 at least you'll definitely see many of these issues.
More Chapters Every Day Brother Heheheh Thanks For Novel Brother And Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel Brother And God bless you Brother And Keep Spirit Brother Nice Novel Brother