Nice I like it so far and I hope you don’t quit writing. ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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You know I don’t wish to come off as a hater but so far iv read up to 10 chapters and all I can say is this book is trash
Im not great with reviews but this story is great so far. Similarly to the ofher reviewers, I believe this story has a lot of potential. Though the chapters could be released a but more often, each chapter is great to read. Sorry if that didn’t make much sense ? This story is amazing!
the novel is worth a try its pretty good.the character is naive but reasonable because of his last life,the lack of interaction,experience, and being isolated in community makes a good reason for lacking in common sense,it will be great in future character development.but the skills and system is to op,you should tone it down. Make your character grow smarter his decision making should sound reasonable,his planning in solving problems,and you should include his future plans for his grow in power ,dont make him a retard in later chapters its a big no no.and the kings garden you should develop it make it a fortress like asgard make a kingdom building genre. so far it is good,good luck on your novel
There is no justice here in Africa at all. My friend donated his kidney and they gave him 2 million dollars . I came with 12 kidneys and they're now calling police for meme.??
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. Follow me for exp ;)16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Though the chapters are short (i read only 50 chaps) the story is intriging and fun to read and is somewhat gives a feel as we are delveing into some universal truth or facts (lol me) so would recommended you to read it no problem about the lack of words or content in a chapter
Good Story Bruh I just want to say to keep going to do more chapters Bruh...B R U H . . . ? ? ? ?Some Cookies BRUH..?????????????????????????
Great storyline, world building is not easy to understand, mc is more relatable to the average human put in a peculiar situation. Chapter updating is completely horrible though.
The MC is overpowered and the story background is still going along the plot not like some other author that waste chapters and still go astray
I really like how funny the 2 Mc and how they resolve their problems.The relationship between the two are interesting and funny.thank you for writing this