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I am writing this review at chapter 530. The book had a very strong beginning and middle, but everything seems to have changed, the story was good when it only centered around the mc and his adventures with cool kingdom building. But after the writer decided to make the whole extraction powers public, the story seems too complicated for its own good, already the mc seems like the most important/ potentially most powerful person in the whole universe. I really wish the mc was more careful with the info he divulged. At this pace with the story decision the writer has made I really feel like the mc has to deal with gods to keep the story grounded. In a way the origin expanse and the real world are 2 different stories, on the origin expanse the mc is less public and hence he can have quiet and meaningful growth. Whereas the the real world is a dumbsterfire where mc has to deal with the whole world. Yeah the writing Quality is good but I really feel that the story was really accelerated in the real world that even super powers are attacking a 19 year old and the same 19 year old is making decisions that can change the whole universe and hence normalcy can never be achieved in it without adding serious power creep. I am just angry because I am disappointed cause if taken slower the story progression could have been better.
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Hc you are doing well in school and the other is a quick question for a quick question regarding the date of my Hero Academia you are the one who is
This book stands with a couple others for me as a creme de la creme story, munya. It is 100% worth a read under pretty much all circumstances, munya.
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I dunno how I feel about another one of these cultivation novels. Just seems to be repeats of other novels on this site. Of course this kid had to come from modern earth and of course he has to have a super ancient or powerful bloodline that awakens... even mentioning eternal eyes, why not just say he has freaking Sharingans?
Over all the whole concept and how its distinguished is very well done. People might think its been rushed but for me by how its going i think the pace is perfect, so I hope it keeps on going because i have high expectation for it.
If you want to read a good book without spending.. with a good plot ... Many characters but you will never come to the point that you will be confused... Had a good ending.. have readers until now..This book is for you.. you can enjoy reading once you download this book and tadda'.... Have a good reading guysss
Webnovel doesn't understand that it has become monotonous and boring. but these novels still keep coming, i reckon there is no quality control on webnovel
Amei,ainda mais o relacionamento dele com alea e gostei de como ele protege o Arthur gostei do decorre da história como ele respeita a erendo real do manga
