I am 99%,sure that the Book has been dropped. It was a good book while it lasted, especially the recent chapters(after 406), which were good. Too bad the author dropped after introducing some major plot points.
Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel.Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.
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Nandhan_Kumar: The story seems very realistic , it felt like really happened in front of my eyes , they way of narration is excellent.the author really touched people's heart ??
I love this story i cant help it its too good Plus he's not the only prev. -w-
The world background and writing quality is good but character design is very bad, it is like every one has smoked something illegal and went on their daily lives.
OK - first let me start by saying that I love sci-fi novels (and that I think this novel is a gem, and deserves more credit than it's getting). I also happen to love fantasy novels. But what I really, really love are novels that manage to blend these two genres together creating an entertaining, well-written, action-packed, science <3's magic, totally amazing story.And that, my friends, is exactly what this author puts out. The characters are interesting, little to no grammatical errors, not to mention a sometimes hilarious, sometimes action/gritty, holistically amusing story-line! And as a bonus feature, the author seems to have a background in science and combat?? Regardless, the author sprinkles cool sounding combat and science-techno jargon throughout the story; while I'm not sure any of it's correct, it sounds frickin' awesome. Keep the good work, dear author, and I'll keep reading!
It was good but then after ch 250 the book became a bunch of nonsense that I can’t force myself to read this garbage I just wasted so much time
Do you guys have any idea if this is harem or not?............... .......................................?????????????????..
MC seemed to gain a strong spirit, but it seems they're going to make him a healer instead of becoming an op fighter, maybe it will change... i was hoping for an fighter so not my cup a tea