Great work. A piece of art by Killer Bee in the form of words. Enchanting and I almost forgot about the time while reading. It captures your interest and makes you wonder ," Why the fack there aren't anymore chapters?"Great Read. I recommend everyone that gets across this to read at least 5 chapters. It won't take too much time, but would be great feeling if you end up liking it
Writing Quality 4/5: Good word diversisty and well structured sentences, the reader won't struggle here. There are however a few minor typo's every few chapter that are probably due to autocorrect. I.E: Brian becomes brain.Story Development 4.5/5: The story focuses Mc's inventions/discoveries used for the betterment of others, be it individuals or entire communities. Something I'd like more of is POV's from different characters it's one thing to see the improvements of the Burtons via the MC another entirely from the POV of say a guard.Character Design 4/5: The MC is too OP... Well that is sort of the point but I think I'd enjoy the story more if the MC had to work together with say Ceasar to perfect the manuals for the major heavenly laws. In the end it feels as if other major characters in the story can never measure up to the MC.Updating Stability 5/5: Seems to update frequently, I just binged nearly 300 chapters so I'll just leave 5/5.World Background 4.5/5: Starts out as pretty standard xinxia fare I.E: eight kingdoms, 4 empires multiple planets. While you read the story however the book/novel takes the time to introduce dukes and the royal family from both the Mc's kingdom and foreign kingdoms.
I don't know actually how stable this book updates. the character is not dumb, has decent temper overal. world building premise is good but since the book hasnt yet progressed far it's still in it's infancy. It's not the most unique spin on this concept but it's written in a way that doen't need it to be. which in itself is quite a feat. up until now I've had a very enjoyable read overall. will keep on picking this book up. keep up the good work
Been reading supreme magus since the beginning. It’s beautiful and well thought out. The author has a great grasp on English. The character progresses through a type of cultivation. But most of his progress is through hard work and learning from his mistakes!
man this is really good also how fat will he progres will he be prodigy like itachi or not and if he is a prodigy will he show it or hide it i it was me i would show it anyway if i didnt already use my stones for today i would have voted i will vote tomorrow
This novel should be read by those people who are curious about reincarnation. It might stir something that is about not giving up to the current status quo of life. overall this novel is awesome.
Interesting plot!! Can't wait for the next update..
great book where is the rest of the chapters please and thank you
the author is playing the same senerio again and agin dragging the story unnecesssarily...I had great expectations from this book but I guess the writer enjoys writing male centric stories that torcher women ..highly disappointed ...removing it from the library.....
Loving this book so far
I can't wait for more chapters to this book.
You are my favourite author, I love how the story unfolds and is written. I love Kyle’s story