Quite disappointed that this book was dropped. Especially since the author wrote Charm of Soul Pets and Versatile Mage and I think that the trash Super Optimization Fluid was picked instead
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Muy buena novela (Es decir mejor que la basura y mucho peor que cualquier libro decente) , con un comienzo increíblemente lento por lo cual dudo que sea elegida.
Es una novela de juegos de supervivencia , el protagonista que recuerde no es muy interesante , pero los juegos están interesantes.
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This limit thing is dumb, really makes spam be the more likely approach, anyway.
The writing in itself is not bad, didn't see many mistakes if any, the rest is the problem, relationships turn from 0 to 100 real fast, a few hours change everything, didn't help to give depth to characters or make said relationships compelling.
The Story is somewhat awkward, the development until the point I read didn't appeal to me and was kind of beaten down by how poorly I felt the relationships developed.
The characters seem one dimensional, without depth and completely passive to the world around them, "Oh okay I accept being the support of thirty different people in a setting with real danger and with little to no real benefit besides getting a fiance that fell in love with me at first sight." c'mon, I know how plagued by such things the Isekai genre is, but generally, the typical protagonist is not given a choice he's just suddenly in another world and is screwed, this one made a choice, for me it was the wrong one.
Finally, the world or worlds were simply not described, left entirely to the imagination of the reader, it'll already be a challenge in and of itself to make dozens of legitimately compelling worlds, not even bothering to describe them will not help.
This story is clearly being written by a beginner author, so let me give a little advice, plan a little ahead, give time to your characters to develop themselves and their relationships, and invest in the world you are creating if you want people to like your story.
You don't need to describe the texture of the pebble by the side of the road, but what I'd like to know is, how is the school, how do the characters look, do they have a uniform, does the clairvoyant old man have a huge beard, does the bro-con princess have amber eyes?
The plot and writing style is fun and light with a moderate pace. The story flow is also relatable and the character description is good! I think it will be better if you add more description about the places but overall it is an interesting one! Keep up the good work author!!
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Saying on the point that it was a great story ahead! So much for being hurt when you read the title, a dose of happiness is really hard to find!
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I hope you guys continue continue his character the way it is in the story and adding more chapters I don't know why you got stop adding chapters but please do continue[img=recommend][img=update] thank you so much for this chapter and I like every chapter that I read.
Cool start!!! Non-trivial, fascinating plot and I hope for a further interesting storyline. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Highly recommend!!!
It is not a bad story, but it is a weak story.
It develops too quickly, besides that many things are a little pointless, a historian, apparently without training or one, becomes a specialist in fighting and things like that from one moment to the next.
It is a story to pass the time and for those who do not care about an empty reading and without depth.