This novel is a bit acceptable as long as you could tolerate everything in it. I just wanna ask or suggest to the author to stop adding romance or writing romance. 'Cause it's terrible! I can tolerate the mtl-like translation and other mistakes but not the romance on this novel. It's unbearable and unreasonable!!!
Chapter 573...i liked the novel i read 500 chapters in 2 days doing nothing else...but this getting ridiculous now.Why is he always fighting? Just because its a cultivation novel u cant keep him in danger all the time and no it doesnt make the story more exciting it makes it draining on the reader. U need to have a few good chapters with story in them in between acting as a buffer. But here the guy just keeps fighting from 1 place to another..and always so pathetically weak? When is he actually going to get strong? At the last chapter when the novel ends?
Great story so far and great character development, no complaints I'm currently on chp 243.Justin departure left me on a cliffhanger i wonder when he'll run into the 4th Wife. and will Mac continue to be an issue? just wish updates were more frequent.
shut down your brain and you can enjoy this novel, mc is a gamer that was reincarnated in another world with all his memories intact, but I don't know how all his gamer brain knows how to do everything, just bc he is a gamer, this doesn't make no sense, but what I say in the beginning, just shut your brain down and maybe you can enjoy this novel. If you were looking for a new TLM you will get disappointed, this novel is mid to the core, it's an amazing mid novel, but this is it.
Love the novel just finished reading chapter 287 deffo one of favourites right now the world background and characters are amazing aswell as the leveling system and story love the way it’s heading only problem was the writing were author sometimes mixes names or repeats chapters and class names though it hasn’t happened as much in the past 100 chapters still better than a lot of other stories and doesn’t effect the reading can’t wait for next chapter deffo a hidden gem surprised tht u dnt have to pay for chapters aswell considering how good it is anyway it’s a great novel tht u should atleast try to read.?
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Keep forging ahead; though the path ahead may be winding and challenging, filled with animosity and threats towards author of the NTR genre. Disregard all that, and spread the beauty of NTR across the WORLD!!!
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I gave Focus a 5/5 in everything but writing quality. It isn't that I make any major errors, but it seems like I can never re-read through a chapter I've uploaded without wanting to pull my hair out because I made a typo here, or spelt something wrong there. But! if you can forgive an author for constantly spelling dao, doa, I'm sure Focus will be something you enjoy for a long time to come!
Aside from my mistakes, Focus has a lot of strengths. I believe the world and lore are all very interesting. There are countless clans and sects, and each has a unique history with each other that pushes the story forward. In terms of character development, Chen rui straight forward as you can get, but it's clear he himself . I also try to give every important character a unique backstory of note that explains their motivations and personality.
For stability of uploads, that's something you never have to worry about :) I've been uploading at least 2 chapters a day for the better part of a month now, and the only times I uploaded a single chapter was back when I didn't split my 4000 word chapters in multiple parts. You'll have something to come back to enjoy everyday :)
As for the story itself, the second volume will speak for itself. The first was an introductory arc, where we introduce the mc, who he is, his back story, and his first female companion. The second, however, truly delves into the lore of the Focus verse. We have mystery, backstabbing, and plenty of face slapping.
I hope you'll all enjoy Focus as much as I enjoy writing it everyday! :)
Hey, Author here. I’m really happy to see such good comments about my book, and I hope it continues into the future as well. But that’s not what I wrote this review for...
If someone rates the book at 3-4 stars, I sincerely believe that there was an issue with the book. After all, I can’t notice everything wrong, so I will check to see if there can be any improvements. Additionally, I hope that people who give 3-4 stars will specify what problems they see. Also, I would love to have those people to come back and read the altered novel again before finally deciding how they feel.
Last of all though, to all readers and writers alike, thank you for taking the time to read it. Have fun !
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