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My first reaction after reading this is actually suprise me, Its been a awhile since i got hooked on a novel(only read 2 novel). But then again im looking forward to see more works of yours. [img=recommend]
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A story with an interesting story arc with a dark and depressing undertone in it.
Jason is an interesting protagonist to read, his backstory was dark and compelling but he kinda gave me that ‘guy-who-always-gets-the-ladies’ vibes. Jason has a personality, which some writers tend to forget to add. Alina took me a while to like, it’s probably because I found her POV a bit cliché but like Jason, she has personality and quirks. I’m actually curious if this is Harem or not, I lost count re-checking the tags just to see if it was a harem. The side characters were decent, I like how Michelle has a great personality, and usually, some writers ignore the side characters and don’t even bother making them real and relatable.
I love the world-building, the writer took the time to make the story tangible and real. It was exciting and it made me want to ask for more. I was curious how the world works and I love every minute of it.
The story does feel like a manuscript (especially reading Alina’s POV), it felt like I was reading a script. There were more dialogues than paragraphs. There were some parts it kind of feel like cheesy but I didn’t mind at all. The story is full of flashbacks, it sucks that Webnovel doesn’t have formatting styles here because I got confused when suddenly I’m reading a backstory without any warning. Some chapters were short, so it kind of threw me off, the story does have that ‘anime’ ambiance to it.
I could visualize some scenes especially when it comes to reading Jason’s POV, which I’m totally happy about it since my mind usually takes a while to see the story.
I love your cover! But I’m a graphic designer
SLOW!!!!!
TOO SLOW PACED!!!!!
Very engaging.
So far our MC hasn't needed to really fight, and the politics and schemes have been good. A breath of fresh air to be honest.
The general concept is interesting but to
bad it was wasted of this garbage novel.
The characters are so annoying in the novel. The story feel like it was written/typed by a 10 year old.
Enjoyed it , it was fun to read .
Wanna know more about the world , the mc .
Is Hella gonna be important? What about the others introduced? Like her mother .
What is the mc's background?
It's all a mystery for now , especially since there are only 3 chapters as of this review.
But yeah , would recommend it.
This is an amazing book. Word count below, don't read it.
We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it
Inside, we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
And if you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
(Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up)
We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it
Inside, we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Saw the synopsis. I simp maids!!..............................................................................................………………..........
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