Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
Hey everyone, I'm the author of SPYP and I'm just making sure everyone knows the situation. I'm a complete beginner in terms of webnovel writing, so I'm not sure my abilities will be able to meet expectations but I appreciate any feedback and comments. Also my release schedule will probably be S,T,Th and bonus chapters if the feedback is good enough. Most importantly, I am a college student so I might not be able to upload some days, if that happens I will try to make up for it the next day. Thank you and I hope you enjoy the story!
This is a review of the first chapter. The main character is Li Yu who was orphaned at age 11. To avoid going into the army Li Yu has been working as a hunter to feed and shelter himself and his younger brother. The world he lives in has both mortals and immortal cultivators. During one hunting trip, he finds a gem inside his prey. Soon after a mysterious voice keeps asking him to join a cultivation chat group. The story is written with a sense of humor.
This is an amazing book, with lots of detail, and has lots of cliffhangers. It makes you want to continue. with the continuing of the chapters, the books gets more and more vibrant and alive. i actually felt like I was in this world. This is an amazing book, you should definitely read it.
I like reading novels like watching a movie. Small details about the color of clothes, culture, times, climate etc will greatly help me digest a written story.Maybe I'm in a hurry, hopefully the next chapters can be found such amazing details
:) ?. This is pretty good. Even if it has 7 chapters.
Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do IA full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you
A cosmic conspiracy spanning thousands of years.A story of civilizations struggling to survive.A glorious quest of discovery and redemption.All hidden under the cover of this seemingly light-hearted novel.Is this an epic? Yes, with a capital E.Is this a "slice of life" story? Also yes, You'll feel like Hao Ren is your next-door neighbour.
I will not die not for someone else this is the sypnosisBut why do you have romance isnt that will make the story the opposite of your story
i thaught i would enjoy this book due to how mc powers up being similar to a phew books i rather enjoy and also the added extra of maids caught my intrest however i have to say that the mindset of the mc is so bad a complete and uter beta which i do not enjoy reading. i could of potentially accepted this fact and continued reading the story for the 20 chapters however the inconsistencys with the mcs attributes just pushed me over the edge and as such i shall not read any further to save my sanity. however i can see that this will potenially be a good book however it is not for me.
I mean, do you really need a review to tell you to check this out?