Story is ok has sone potiential. Tiny inconsistencies throughout novel, not a big deal but puts a damper on the fun. Overall it would be worth a read if there were more chapters. So far only read 4 so will need to see later when more chapters are released
gostei muito desta história e queria ver muito mais! é bem construída (no meu ponto de vista) e gosto de como ela se desenvolve, amei!❤
Yea unexpectedly good. Different and unique. i like it cos it's not a cliche where u can predict like 90% of the chinese novel.Though i felt it was scary in some chapters
Please don't. There are already to many of this kind of novel and this one makes the same mistakes the others make as well.There is no character development because there is no struggle, at most the MC has to put in the minimum amount of work to lead a life of luxury.There is no tension, no sense of excitement and no character interaction.
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First 10 chapter is good, after that is ok I guess, but the real problems is bad grammar. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
Can someone pick back up this novel please and thank you it has a really good story i would like to finish. This is also one of my first times righting a review so this sentence is just so i can post it.
I'm once again sad that a great novel with potential didn't get picked but instead got dropped from the choices for next transaction. This book has an amazing story about 2 brother and 1 sister with no talent whats so ever and the eldest brother who got isekai did what he could to get revenge for his farthers murder. Now if you need me im just gonna go in a corner and cry again.
This novel is so good and also so ridiculous ?? I almost died laughing to some of its chapters ?? If you want some laughter and wheezing you should definitely give this a try ?Ps: Hopefully they will continue translating, my will is not strong enough to read MTL ?
Amazing first 19 Chapters. We have growing world tension and world building (the mystery surrounding the changes in the past millenia is rife with conspiracy). Although our MC is Chinese he immediately dons his character’s name…major plus for acclimating to his ”new” environment. Translation quality is also superb.Hmm…No annoying characters (yet), a compelling overarching mystery driving the plot forward, and a decent MC (hopefully he gets more development when he interacts with his old companions)…5 Stars. ?
ProsWorld building Loving familyVr game mechanicsConsMC character is not consistent. He is supposedly a genius but I haven’t seen any such thing from him. Being a genius, he is also oblivious to females around himI don’t mind stories with or without harem. But this one is obviously going for the non harem route with Luna as the fmc but leading lot of girls to the MC. Amanda is not properly resolved