Suggestion: this novel has an interesting story. a nerd who is selfish and experienced in thinking. in an urgent situation he can see the advantages and disadvantages. example in the outer disciple competition(In other novels maybe the protagonist would hide everything and pretend to be smart because of tricking the cultivation level with the reason of ALMIGHTY SYSTEM And Ada would seek thrill by slapping the opponent's butt.) But the novel had a flaw in terms of background. example(if han cai is relaxed why not make pills or formations, don't rely too much on the system. if you have free time add more experience with pills, formations or talismans.)And what I like is the time skip, if the time skip would you please explain in more detail about the things that went through for example refining the longevity pill for his father or his mortal family? it's much nicer to look at than to look at the sights all the time or at least once make another hobby (silver flute) calms down in terms of cultivation. and heavy on his explorations (spirit mine) and occasional comedic themes to keep things less tense.DON'T LISTEN TO THE RATS STILL ON YOUR OWN HEART. IF THERE ARE ANY INTERESTING SUGGESTIONS THEN THINK ABOUT IT.
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This novel has it all : RACIST , HOMOPHOBIA, PEDOPHILE, HAREM of all little girls. And to think he is a teacher. Truly disgusting and repulsive. I wouldn’t have given a rating if I could.
Nice concept but bad content. The ultimate genius mc with heaven defying comprehension ability is actually dumb and annoying. If the mc had an enjoyable character and some sensibility it would have been much better.
Premise is good: Earth will soon be doomed so Humans escaped.But that's the only thing that is good in the book.. Author is forcing a political rivalry between countries that it made the countries look like 3 yr old. Author can't decide between actually using a real world name of the country or just make stuff up. Most of the content in the chapters are other humans in the spaceship rambling similar to what you see in the comment section of social media apps (full of nonsense) and doesn't even drive the plot as they are only mere audiences... If you remove those rumblings, those 10 chapters would probably fit in a minimum 1 webnovel chapter.
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The Author's writing style is unique and I love the way the novel is being narrated. The flow from Lee Hyun's thoughts to the scene is very fluid that I couldn't stop reading. The novel is presented in a neat way, and I never experienced being confused due to its clarity. The story unfolds in a stable rate, and I commend the choice of the Author to use Third Person POV. The POV chosen spiced up my reading experience making it a lot more interesting. The novel is set in modern day Korea focusing on the Music Industry. So far it seems big enough to be explored, especially from the eyes of a start-up Entertainment Agency owner who was once a top music composer. The characters are fun to read about, and I'm looking forward to the future that Lee Hyun and his yet-to-be-found comrades will shape. ✨I'm excited to read more! ✨Kudos to the Author! ?Keep it up, and more power Author Bee! ???
A NEW SPORTS NOVEL, LETS GO!!!! Though I prefer basketball and (American) football, I love this novel. A bit lacking on the action side but it’s still a 4/5 from me. Good luck author, I only expect the best from you ?
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