Interesting concept so far, I've read up till chapter 34 so what is to be said going forward is only relevant up till those chapters.Recommendations to the author:1. Get someone to edit your chapters, doesn't have to be a professional editor. In fact, you could also pass it through an application that checks that type of thing automatically. Some misspelled words that are fundamental to the stories development and world background, such as Devine (Divine). As well as some normal misspelling, like: rediculous instead of ridiculous and their when it should be there. Anyways, those are some ****** examples.2. Fix some verb tenses to match with the correct english grammar to make the story flow better.3. Would recommend an overhaul on your sentence structures to make them "smoother". Example, instead of "It was summer. The sun was hot and bright. In the Wissian town there was a colosseum. In the colosseum a fight is happenning between the two magicians. The crowd is cheering for their respective supporting fighters" It was summer and the sun was shining strongly upon the colosseum located in the town of Wissian; where two magicians where currently dueling making the crowd go wild, while cheering for their favored fighter. Excuse my grammar mistakes, even though I am criticizing I am not necessarily a good writer. I think that if you made those corrections your story would be so much better. Nevertheless, it's a very interesting story which I will continue to read since it has got interesting concepts and . So kudos to the author.
This is a very biased review, why well because my cute husband wrote this. overall Anone has a way with words with an imagination I can barely keep up with. spoiler alert, this is a novel about innocence lost, a soul corrupted on an endless climb to power, and eventually a tale of redemption. give it a chance, you definitely won't regret it! I mean come on, it's Anone!
Quero ver por quanto tempo essa história continuará sendo atualizada. Este autor nunca termina suas histórias e sempre começa outra.
A good storyline Can't wait to see how LSR develops. The book is filled with so much thrills and cliffhangers. Please more updates I'm already hooked
I wouldn't recommend this novel to anyone who isn't a masochist, because it's really frustrating how dumb the mc is................................
The story have interesting idea. At first I thought it's a Tokyo Ghoul story but actually it was not alike so much. Then I think this story very captivating and make me wants to read more. It's has a nice storyline and characteristics too. I'll recommended this to those who love a story like this! It has unique vibes!
Author here. This is a book I've written years ago so it might be underwhelming and not up to expectations. However, I hope that someone will enjoy this story. For more recent stories, check out "Your Plot is Mine" or "The Hero will Die". Thank you for reading.
Pretty good so far. I just hope he won't make an enemy with every guild he meets in the Game cuz that would be just another third-rate trash Game Novel. LolThis story is about a guy who's playing the game for a living and he said he's a hunk irl too. ?We haven't been introduced much to the novel but I like the story so far.
man why didnt this get pickedddddddddddd, I swear every good novel I find ends up getting buried by this unfair tribulation called trial reads
Sorry, but the reason for his banishment alone doesn't make sense since no king would marry off the crown prince as a hostage. That would be the downfall for the kingdom after him.
Great story too bad the translations become almost unbearable after chapter 50
The MC is hella stupid and has an ego the size of the moon, instantly revealing his abilities the second he gets them just for some face slapping action.I bet all the 5 star reviews are fake.