I fell like I’m going to enjoy this soooooo 5 stars! Keep it up.This review must be 140 characters. This review must be 140 characters. This review must be 140 characters.
The world in this story becomes more and more deep and interesting as it goes on. It draws you in from the beginning but keeps you reading. There are some slow chapters but it pays off hugely as the story develops. It's exciting and well-built. Also the characters aren't just pawns, they all seem to have their own motivations and are complex in their own right which makes their interactions all the more enticing. The clear critique is that there are slow chapters, but if all the chapters tried to be exciting without giving room for development, it may become less impactful when things pay off. So I'm fine with those chapters.
Whilst this may be a little biased it is a piece of work that I thoroughly enjoy making and I hope everyone else who reads this will find as much fun and entertainment as I do creating this masterpiece and find it hard to express it through words (last bit too over the top?...) XD
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Хорошо читается, но быстро заканчивается.Нужно больше чтива и как можно скорее.Хорошо читается, но быстро заканчивается.Нужно больше чтива и как можно скорее.
This novel is great and I recommend you try this. Grammar is good and the mc is evil or rather he will do anything for his goals and purpose. You will feel like you are watching a movie when reading this, the scenes are described well and the definitions are also great. As a ghost Negary is an evil existence that manipulates people to get the best of what a human can offer.
That's a good story. On the current moment (Chapter 8) it's more developing the world background, but I'm anxious for what's next. On the moment, I just don't understand so good the bloodlines system. How they are chosen? Why two bloodlines for the Mc? For the concept of a game, it's don't make so much sense for the balance of the game. I want more development on this way on the future too.
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Eu ja tinha lido no tempo do wattpad era fida a historia , acho que agora o mc ficou meio trevoso mas ta massa so um pouco complicado o fato dele fugir de mulher mas ta massa.
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you know I've been reading this novel since about 60 chapter's and I have to say still one of the best I've read so if get the chance I'd recommend you give a shot