Good Book. Some inconsistencies and forced narrative shifts but overall much better than generic cultivation novels. Has a strong female character in the initial chapters, no flowery Jade skin descriptions. Light novel done right.
It's a good novel. If you look past the obviously rushed first chapter, there's nothing terrible about it.Writing quality 5*- Apart from the first few chapters, the grammar is good. Even those first few chapters are better than a good majority of the novels I've read on here. Though the grammar could always improve, 5 stars, for now, seem appropriate. Stability of updates 5*- Simple. The author releases at least one chapter a day.Story development 5*- It's too early into the novel to really say but for now I think it's going in the right direction.Character design 5*- Is going in the right direction. The characters and their reactions are genuine enough for a work of fiction and I got nothing to complain about. I enjoy Johnathan and the other twos characters. I also like their powers. Again, I have nothing to complain about. World Background 4*- This is by far the worst thing in this novel. However, that's compared to everything I reviewed so far. The world-building isn't bad but so far nothing's really shown how the world changed since the start. But I can understand why nothings really been said. in the novel, not much time has passed. Around 1 or 2 days. Which isn't long at all. So I have hope that once more time passes, the author will explain how everything changed and focus more on world-building.So that is my review. I hope this is helpful to those who are hesitant or are debating on whether to read. It's a good novel, but it's a bit early to decide and give a definite score. However, everything said, I believe the novel is quite promising. With the small teasers the author gave in the beginning, I doubt it'll only be zombies. Overall, I say this novel is a 4.8. It could go up or down, but for now, I say it's a reasonable score. Thanks for reading, and Author, I hope you keep up the good work. I do suggest rewriting the first chapter and extending it so it's less rushed and more natural.
I like the book so far. It's got an interesting premise, and the author knows what he's doing. They have written some great books so I'm sure this one will be good too.
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It's delightful to read stories of various kinds of genre. This author nailed it! I'm not usually a fan of this genre, but the story resonates well with me. Keep up the good work.
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Come on people its been more than 5 weeks , kindly vote for this awesome story. The idea is new and fresh expecting to experience multiple stories which froge the MC to have a Strong Unyielding character and a powerful knowledge of cultivation just like the MC of Emperors Domination so please vote.
I go through these chapters like candy I need more!! I'm in love with the MC's ruthlessness it's true ruthlessness not like other novels that will say their MC is ruthless and then crumble when they see a hot girl. No this, this is a masterpiece, not only does the MC value his life over everything, the author makes it seem so natural. The details for every fight aren't clunky, they are sharp and intelligent packets of information that make it easy to imagine and follow the fight. The gore, God, the gore is amazing I can't describe it to you, you just have to read the story to find out. Another positive is that I can see this story being quite long and have many discoveries that make you want to buy the 35 premium chapters just to see more! Absolutely amazing novel.
Amazing book, all I want is to read it further, so please start translating it officialy, am tired of waiting. And it's an amazing book, mc seems to be cool
I read this on Wattpad. One of my favorites stories honestly. Although I read a lot of them I rarely have one where I look forwards to the next update.
Fascinating, Engaging, Immersing???Really loved it. The description, actions, emotions and thoughts of the characters, all of it was captivating. Good job author! Keep it up. Waiting for more chapters???
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