This novel is just word diarrhea, the novel barely makes any sense. Really bad translation. It's so bad it starts to get on your nerves, the dialogs don't make sense, the characters cannot be properly identified. I would stay far away from this novel, the story may be good (I haven't read the whole novel) but the writing makes me want to throw my phone at the wall.
this is the 3rd or 4th time that they are using this cover for different novels xDword word word word word word word word word word word word word word word
please more more morei like the story very mutch
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Kids loses his only friend so he commits suicid...........mtherfker is this a serious plot. i cant. somekid wants 2 die cuz he lost his only fking friend
isnt this “sent to a parallel demon world with magic) or sum like that? (Forgot the whole name) but its been out i want to say 4 a tear now.
Hey guys! Author here! This self-review will serve as a guide for everyone who wishes to begin reading the novel: 1. Writing Quality - I've gotten a lot of comments on changing from past to present tense. I agree that I do not have a perfect grammar sense, and I thank every reader who has been generous enough to point out my mistakes.? However on some parts the use of present tense is intended to show that, the thing being shown or stated is still there. This means that if I say something like: The King is the mightiest warrior, it means that he still is. 2. Stability of Updates - Chapters will be added daily and in this specific sequence:2.a. Weekends - 1 Chapter2.b. Monday and Friday - 2 Chapters2.c. Tuesday - Thursday - 3 Chapters.I would sometimes go above the number of chapters added daily. But that's only if I'm in a good writing mood. ? 3. The story is basically slow pacing. Other information on the story development are as follows:3.a. Fights- The main character (along with the subordinates) will always struggle in fights instead of just outright overpowering the opponents. Even on fights where the mc has the upper hand, he'll still have a plan prepared. This is because, I don't want to create a main character who plows down opponents just because he's buffed. Although some of his strategies may be questionable, that is part of him being human. If there aren't any mistakes then he won't be human anymore. Oh and don't argue that he's smart. There's a difference between being smart and being omniscient.?3.b. Romance - None of the sort will appear for the mc anytime soon. I want him to develop as he is without any outside forces such as courting and romance to influence his growth. There may be hints along the story but, I don't plan on giving him a female counterpart until he becomes a perfectly balanced character.3.c. Flashbacks - this is a personal preference of mine because I want to introduce new characters properly without having them actually say anything about themselves. Thus, I made a concept which is [Memory Piece] which serves as a playback for characters and some mysteries shrouding them.4. Character Design - I've tried my best in making a well rounded main character. Again, let me point out that he is human and as such, he will make a lot of human - like decisions. But most of the time, he is calm and collected with his ideas. The main character also uses the knowledge he acquired on earth in order to benefit his missions on Mythos. Other characters will also have their fair share of development as I've put the story on Third Person PoV. This means that I can place as many expositions as I want even if the main character has no knowledge of these things. Plus, this makes it possible to show the thoughts of other characters which adds in the understanding of what kind of persons/gods they are.5. World Background - I've actually put some details on the background at the beginning of the novel. Other things however will be explained as the story progresses. Note:Thank you for taking time in reading my novel. I know that there are a bunch of things I can still improve on and I try to do those everyday. If you hate it, or if the story is distasteful for you, there's nothing I can do about that. I can only improve as the story goes along and, if you choose to drop it without seeing the actual progress then I can only thank you for taking your time reading.Thank you everyone!
Well, for the 20 or so chapter, you'll have every trope that a xianxia novel can have throw at you. I'm talking about the seeming thrash clan/family/group heir with great potential, the overly strong maid/butler, the transmigrant and time traveler which can pull out of his as* all the mumbo jumbo in the existence, and, last but not least, a obnoxius enemy young master in the power play.But the people like it, so if that is your thing, rejoice.
The story is good and I can see that author is trying to balance the fantasy and reality and I appreciate the hard work. But I think, that the story is a little slow but that is covered up by the view presented by the author. I would say,good work author and keep it up. ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️?????
Any butthurt ww readers should probably stop reading what im about to say. First, qidian owns the raws, allowing them to do whatever they want with it. second, zen went mia quite often, qidian just picked up the novel. if you think about it, why would qidian pick up a novel thats already translated at a decent pace..maybe cuz its not? RWX that petty **** probably made zen started the chapt spams to completion just to make sure that qidian doesnt earn much money from it which i think is kinda stupid since theyre already leeching more than enough money from qidian. what tling is, at its core is just to make a certain group of readers understand the story. what that means is that, they have no rights to the novel. if anyone is saying that they do, try getting one piece of text online and make it readable to others.. does that mean that the piece of text is now yours? come on grow up. look at all popular books that are translated. harry porter etc..just coz its translated doesnt mean that the translator has the rights over it. dont make ww seem all that special can you? rens a manipulative *****. and please, stop talking about the contract. ren can say whatever he wants, at the end of the day, who are you to vouch for him? have you personally read the contract? even so, ren claims that theyre all fan translators, does taking the right for the novel make you a fan? does monopolising the money the novel makes make yoy a fan? at the end of the day, theyre just greedy fucks.
characters are extremely generic the mc is the worst of all. always risking his life for no reason, standing up to the strongest beings hoping they won't kill himstory: the mc is hunted throughout the whole story, always somebody after him for whatever reasons mostly bc of some kind of beauty, one time he saved a princesses life by sucking out poison and in turn was hunted down by them for touching her body and when they noticed his talent they got engaged ect.ect...
He's back disgusting little obedient grandson with no semblance of a connection too the modern world. He has no ambition, and pledges his life to this random master of his like a real c!nt pushover. He doesn't deserve a system. Dropping.This mc isn't worth reading about.