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Great book with a great story filled with well done characters. The story pacing and exposition goes in balanced clip and the main character is not OP but has to deal with real obstacles both in his power and the challenges of the situations presented. This book is well worth the read with the only downside is latter day editing. Towards the 300+ chapter mark the translation begins to miss the paragraph breaks and punctuation along with sentence spacings. Also, at least one chapter has been heavily censored and a good portion of the chapter removed completely. A few times along the book certain segments or paragraphs have been paraphrased or edited to lazier, shorter phrases. A joke here, an opinion there. Not the whole picture originally offered. Paraphrased. Other than that, I very much appreciate the author and the original story material.
It's JMJink here, totally unashamed?I wanted to clarify a few things. The story is quite lengthy and features many characters because it unfolds on a large scale. I've aimed to balance the world-building, character development, and plot.This is my first novel, and I'm learning a lot as I go. By the time I finish, I hope to rewrite it in a much better way.✌️✌️English isn't my native language, so please bear with me ?. Just focus on the story—it's a true masterpiece (yes, I do love my story, Des-picable Me?).Anyway, stay tuned! ?
So far loving everything. Especially our MC not being stupid and immediately going for the new personality, thing. Writing Quality: So far so good, I haven't seen any particular big grammatical errorsStability of Updates: A regular update of once every second day. Which is an easy perfect score.Story Development: Haven't really read enough to say much about it but I like the build up for upcoming events and such.Character Design: Best part of the story.World Background: I have already gotten a great input of multiple different things but not a lot politically, wich is a big thing for me. So yeah, loving this so far and recommending it to anyone who loves intelligent and scheming protagonists.
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Look pretty interesting, the story is what it say in the synopsis so i hope that the mindless ntr hater don't start bothering the story and author.Anyway here is my support, good luck and don't give up!
already know this novel is destined for greatness. looking foward to how it plays out in the future!
Just by reading the first 3 chaps you know for sure that the author has skills, be writes as is describing a world that he is living it .The mc , yeah i can feel everything he is feeling , his loss his pain , his confusion to be reincarnated again, yeah i only want to say , please give this author a chance because he can amaze for sure .
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An amazing novel, a definite must read for all those peeps out there.So first is writing quality, which I hope and believe is completely top tier. If it isn't then please come and get into my pants about it, cause I'm the editor and it's my job to make sure the writing is as tippy top as possible. So yeah, if they're any mistakes, you all can blame it on me. 5 stars for this of course.Next is the stability of updates, and since this is a fairly new novel, I will only be giving it 4 stars like all the other new novels I review, as this category isn't applicable yet.After is story development, which I think is at a pretty good pace. It's not the greatest, but it's not the worst either. Like, it doesn't make you want to read each chapter with a fervor like Solo Leveling, but it isn't a slog or a bad read. The pace is fine, and the story so far is creative and unique. A solid 4 stars.The 4th is character design, and well, it's another 4 stars just due to the fact that the protagonist, although has his special features, is made up of like two generic stereotypes. The first is that he's a calculating guy, referred to as a prodigy a lot of times in the novel. The second is that he's courageous and will sacrifice himself to protect his comrades. So, both these make up the main character, making him pretty generic, but, what're you gonna do about it? Most characters on the platform are like this anyways, and I believe that you guys will like him. Also, don't wanna spoil, but he gets a lot more interesting as the story progresses, so read it for that.Lastly, there's the world background, an excellent 5 stars. Honestly, this is the first time that I've heard a story like this, so full points on the uniqueness. Like, all novels on this platform are like, system this, system that, but in this one, the MC is the system, not the host. This presents a certain uniqueness that I hope you all will like.So, overall, a pretty good novel. I would definitely recommend this to someone in passing, and I believe that it has a lot of potential.Good job author!
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