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This is a good story, but the author needs to take note of improper tense usage and an awkward word choice. However, the author is able to paint such a vivid picture with his/her/their words that I felt very drawn into the story. Keep it up, author!
A very basic story in every sense. There is nothing outstandingly bad but nothing stands out as really good either. it lacks depth(no character building or world building) and progresses from one cliche to the next. After 20 chapters, nothing really interested me enough to continue. Overall, above average for this site but lacked enough appeal for me to continue.
Nice story and nice writing style. I felt like I was in the book. The synopsis is great and first chapter was very touching. I will be back soon with a much time. Keep going! I cheer you!
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Okumaktan çok keyif aldım. Hikaye akıcı, karakterler oturmuş. Detaylandırma ve tasvirler çok iyi. Devamını sabırsızlıkla bekliyorum. Şiddetle tavsiye ederim.
This is such a stupid story already it seems like it wants it to be a VR story but then all of a sudden it is a PC game. It seems to try to act like the MC is actually fighting and doing everything but then it is him using a keyboard and mouse. It even writes it out like all the characters are showing their emotions and able to move however they want. It even says on the first day of the game opening that people were moving around being amazed and stunned by the looks and the way they move like games with good movements is something new for them.Then we get to the fact that the story is trying to say that almost everyone in the world is stopping to play a PC game. Like just because it was made that everyone is going to go out to buy a gaming computer and stop using any other gaming system. This would make so much more sense if like other stories this was a VR. Other stories that say things like this I can kinda believe if it is the first of its kind and mostly realistic.
I wasn't expect something like this, the girl was somehow infected and is turning into a monster. Actually, it's in the name of the novel, but still, I wasn't expecting her to become a monster chased by society.The real star in this book is the building of tension, as the chapter progress we are eager to see the outcome of a chase, but the author keeps teasing us.It is a good reading for suspense reading, I recomend.
We are not told much about this world, everything seems forced and unexpected. It would be best to teach us more about the world in a prologue. Some words are misspelled but it does not distract from the story. Other words like ”little” is changed into ”lil” which messes with the story. It would be better to either not use it at all or use the normal spelling.
WOW! What a great story! Very well written and very well thought out. I was shocked by the twist! Well done!! Characters are well developed and interesting!
Great book, very promising beginning, deep lore and worldbuilding. Characters are fleshed out and novel does not seem to make every second character with cookie cutter is eastern fantasy tropes.