first of all, i will always make it free and upload like once a day right now i will do it like until 30 ish chapter ......................
I found this story on a webnovel discussion, they said it was interesting. I was curious and read one to five chapters. The author explains this story well, the characters are clearly described. The plot is focused and does not deviate. Good work!
Never read anything with such a low level of grammar and spelling. Here is a quote from chapter one: "All of us scared, I? of course im scared since im a 40 Years Old man."
=> Wow ... all of me is scared, I.
great book so far. it grips your attention and keeps it.
The big daddy gifted you a castle so you'd better take the gold this time. In next year's competition you won't have a chance after all since I will be taking part
The starting story was a bit off. Mc was a scientist and experience betrayal.
And now he reborn with mage family but still its little weird that his father didn't teach some important matters to mc. I understand it if his father didn't like him but reality are they are in good relationship.
Also the Mc it takes a long time to become mature.
When it comes the power of Mc. The author secretly nerfing the mc. Like he did other things like spell or etc training thingy. So he can't level up fastly even he is talented.
So now at the capital arc. He fights a rank 2 guy and we know he can win it but the thing is Mc really struggle when it comes to sword fight then its a rank 2 and he a rank 3. Which is really a illogical nerf of what he practice all those years only to be nearly defeated by sword fight, if he is still a rank 2, I'm sure mc will be defeated.
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I have always wanted to read a book with game and real life. My dream came true. The plot perfectly describes the grip of the game on a player's life in the book. I'm going to go read the next chapters.
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this book is really good bro, please update some more. This is genuinely the only good basketball online novel I have ever read. You got some serious talent.
Shameless Author Review here. First time writing a novel. Have read a multitude of novels and fan-fics and decided to give it a crack myself.
This will be a world travel related novel. I'm going the route of an OP MC coz thats how i like it. As far as MCs Romantic interests go, i havent really decided and will see how things go and decide later.
Thank you and do feel free to share any constructive criticism or opinions.
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