Okumaktan çok keyif aldım. Hikaye akıcı, karakterler oturmuş. Detaylandırma ve tasvirler çok iyi. Devamını sabırsızlıkla bekliyorum. Şiddetle tavsiye ederim.
The basic is sound, had potential but ruin because of extreme bias.
so far the story basic flow is, bragging, defaming, slandering, stupid bantering, back to bragging, then repeat!
the MC is ok even if he sometime stupid, the rest however is show racist to the high level that rarely seen.
the story also resorting in throwing in name brand to had the search result int the front page with all the key word!
i dont think the title fits the novel, this novel should be called the i can break up a couple, its not considered cheating if the girl didn't get close or kiss the mc all the girl did is break up with his current boyfriend, and the mc is a beta mc who dont like girls
Was a great novel until all the usual Nationalism that so many Chinese novels seem to suffer from comes in. MC only seems to care about people from his country, but Americans? Nah they’re all evil people who “bully people everyday and talk about righteousness and benevolence.”
I just wrote a big review and it did not save, so I'm going to cry real hard, excuse me.
From the little that I have read, this novel is quite ordinary in its premise but quite promising nonetheless.
World background: from the little I've seen, Author-san shows us their world and society with actions more than with long descriptions, so that's pretty nice.
Can't say much about story development yet, but what I can say is that my attention was properly hooked up and I can't wait to see more from it.
Character Design: I think it's a bit early to review this topic since the characters were not truly flashed out yet. However, they do feel unique and discernable from one another and not a bunch of mindless puppets.
Writing Quality: It always feels a bit hypocritical reviewing this topic on stories from non-native speakers, because I'm too learning the language. There're some small typos and weird sentences but they did not compromise my reading experience. What did stand out for me were some complex( in a good way) sentences that were well made contrasting with the weird ones, but that's natural, just a bit peculiar.
THE BIGGEST TOPIC: I don't know how or why, but what I can see in this novel is a lot of care and love from Author-san on writing this. They wish to share the same happy feelings they feel when doing all this and I think that's quite a good mentality. Always answering questions and engaging with readers.
Suggestions: It's easy to say ' get an editor' but's not easy to do it. So here is my small type that I hope can help you. When you write on the author's note the explanation of something you felt confusing, that's a sign to go back and try redoing it. Sometimes we write something so obvious on our heads that we do not make it explicit in the text. It's a hard process to imagine what others will think when reading your text but I think it does help.
Keep the good work!
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look forward
raw link plz
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I think it's great that they chose those two garbage novels over this good one, just fantastic.
I mean what's the point of even voting and buying trial chapters if they pick what they anyway?
I saw several reviews saying that simply from the description that this novel was going to go in a negative, somewhat racist direction. However I don't feel that way about this novel, and am going to rate it rather high till I deem it's rating to be false! Also so that I can get more chapter without some one dropping it half way!!
Raw?
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I am absolutely hooked; the top notch writing quality and delightful story had me up waaaay later than I should have been so I could finish binge reading 150 chapters. The first chapter or two was a little rough but I fell in love before chapter 10.
The author skips the usual slow and detailed world setting at the start, in favor of organically providing details as the story unfolds, and the plot moves at a good pace. You should absolutely read this story.