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Sounds good!! Can only hope this one would be done right... I've been disappointed by most chat group novels.
Such shallow writing, its just another junk food novel its okay to read if u have nothing of decent quality but yeh it has no substance zzzzz [img=coins][img=coins]
Woaah nice novel very intriguing and interesting i like the main character and plot is very nice love to read it and hope that you walso read it man all in all the novel is very goood
I still give it 4 stars at first but, i stop reading at ch 260. The story becomes weird and hard to understand............................ ......... ..
A bullied turned predator, huh. I wonder how it will turn out. Read this novel if you want to see the amazing story of Miam. How he rises through the ranks of specie
Writing is vivid and full of detail. World building is next level and really makes you feel a part of the action. The author has a clear vision and the imaergy is stunning. The story is not very far along at this point, but I feel that is has the potential to be epic. Great work!
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another great action novel from my favorite author. this novel is a notch higher than Double Moon. from the few chapters I've read, I'm already plugged into your world. if the double moon was a gem, this work is a superior gem: things are more explicit and exquisite. of course, let's not compare, both of them have their merits. please upload more chapters, I need to drown myself in them. Overall, nice work.
I would only say about this story that if you like a shrewd and astute Mc you would love it...
I appreciate suggestions and honest reviews, so please go all out with both...
Lastly, if you find any spelling mistakes or grammar errors please point them out!
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Fix your early chapters bro, couldn't handle it due to bad english, typos, and grammar problems besides it might help boost your novel to some extent.
I swear to God if some sign-in novel gets picked instead of this.
Cant really bother giving reviews since this is a translated work and the translator can't do anything about it, so there's little to no reason to give constructive criticism. But 20 iq mobs should really go to school. And all 3rd rate villains need to be actually good or not be 2nd gen rich brats who spend millions trying to kill mc.
